Chapter 4

" I Wont Lose Her "
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Shin's P.O.V

Gosh .... When is she going to stop talking ? And as soon as the teacher left ....I packed my stuff in a hurry , And ran out just in time to see Rap Mon leave ..... Today was the day , I was going to tell him...I didn't care what happened anymore....Maybe it's just not time yet.... I walked home,...Wait Jimin....Aisshh,....I should've rung him up.... maybe I'll just drop by his place....Maybe i can finally tell him about Rapmon.....we talk about almost anything ... So i guess i can tell him this too....

I reached his place , I was about to ring the bell.....I noticed that the door slightly open ....Will it be rude ? What if his Mom was home ? Ok so Doorbell it is...I rung the bell and waited for a few minutes...Finally i lost my patience ...I opened the door . Yaaa Park Jimin... Where are you ?...Mrs Park ? ...I noticed something was off....Then I realised ... Jimin ,....Oh my God....Jiminah...Are you Okay ?Yaaa....I noticed a paper in his hand...He was sitting motionless..i didnt know what had happened to him was he was crying ? Of course...Genius he was crying his mom just left him a note telling him she had left him for good....What do I do ?...What do I say ? I didn't know what to do...I kept saying all the blubberish that came to my mind....I figured out the best thing to do was to take him to my place..He was my best friend...I could convince my mom ....Well Dad wouldn't be a problem cause well...He was never Home anyways....I told him that

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LonelyCrow #1
Chapter 4: Yup, I feel him. Being alone or lonely is seriously the worst feeling in the world.
LonelyCrow #2
Chapter 3: I like this story, however it doesn't flow well because of the multiple periods that are everywhere.

Other than that and a few grammar accidents, awesome :)