Magnolia
Description
„You've ever meant to be … and if you only would've accepted it in the first place, you could've avoid so much of colleteral damages ...“
He was still mocking on her. Though he layed there, seeming all immobilized, and though she was putting a gun right against his temple, he still got the nerves trying to dominate her.
„ … including your deceased hus-“
Foreword
A/N:
Hi guys ~
And welcome to this little story of mine.
Well actually you can consider it more as a short scenario. It's part of a key scene of a story I'm actually planning to write for quite a while now. So please don't mind about it being kind of random and with no futher details such as names and stuff.
However, due to some kind of writer's-block and several other reasons, I wasn't able to ever write down more than this … and I was just trying out a little when I eventually ended up phrasing it in English rather than my mother language.
So it's actually the first time I was trying to write a story in English and since I'm not a native speaker, I'm pretty sure I messed up quite a lot. I wanna apologize therefore.
Please feel free to point out whatever I got wrong. To be honest I really would love you to do so, since I'm yet not sure, wether I shall really give it a try writing this story in English. Of course it wouldn't be any use at all, if my writing will turn out to be a whole mess-up.
Sorry for the whole blah-blah.
I hope you'll enjoy reading.
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