One shot [1/5]

Capture the moment

'What are you doing?' Minseok asked the man who just pointed a photo camera at him and shot, the shutter noise pulling him from his quiet stupor as he was eating a sandwich.

'Documenting,’ the strange man answered, smiling innocently. He took a seat next to him on the bench, a little too close if he may add. Minseok shuffled a bit further away from him.

‘Documenting what?’

‘Everything that interests me.’ The man smiled with a curl at both ends of his lips.

Minseok snorted. The man must be crazy, he thought and appointed his attention to his sandwich again.

‘You don’t believe me, do you? What if I show you the picture?’ the man prompted, shuffling himself closer to him and turning the camera screen to him. The picture showed Minseok’s dull eyes staring at the sandwich in his hands. The man tapped a button and a second picture appeared, this time it’s an unflattering picture of Minseok with his mouth around the sandwich, cross-eyed staring at the sandwich between his lips.

‘Oh what the hell, man. Delete that!’ Minseok spouted out, angered by the man for taking an unflattering unconsented picture of him.

‘No. I think it’s perfect. Do you want to know why I document all these things?’ The stranger answered. Rude.

‘Because you’re an and you like disturbing strangers?’

The stranger laughed, he actually laughed, while Minseok was getting all worked up. ‘If I knew every stranger would react this entertaining, then maybe that could have been my reasoning as well! But no, I like photographs because they can capture a precious moment, which would otherwise be forgotten.’

‘And what about me stuffing my face is exactly precious to you? If you are going to mention my cheeks, I will punch you.’ He had enough comments about his cheeks, his friends even nicknamed him hamster.

Again the stranger laughed. It almost started to become contagious, his serene laughter filling Minseok with something he hadn’t felt in a while. Was it happiness? Or was it comfort?

‘Look at this first picture again.’ The man showed the camera screen again, this time he zoomed in on Minseok’s eyes. ‘What do you see here?’

Minseok scrunched his nose. ‘My eyes?’ He questioned. The man nodded excited and prompted him to continue. ‘They are… Black? They’re not fully opened, like I’m tired or disinterested in what I’m doing.’

‘To me, they look sad. You looked sad when I found you. A stranger on a bench, eating a soggy slapped together sandwich. Your eyes are very beautiful, but they did not shine when I took

this picture. I think they do now.’ The stranger happily declared.

Minseok stared up at the man, his mind blank on how to react to that. This stranger just barged into his life, snapping a picture of him and is now telling him what he feels? Before he could react, the man had waved and walked away.

 

‘Wait,’ Minseok yelled out before he could think about what he was doing. The man turned around and gave him a curious look. ‘What’s your name?’

‘Jongdae, my name is Jongdae,’ the other replied in a soft voice with curled lips.

 

The peculiar man had already left a while ago, but the smile on his lips still lingered in Minseok’s mind. Maybe his words had some truth in them, if only he took a picture of that smile.

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melodyoficeandfire
#1
Chapter 5: I hope finding this comment in the year 2021 (years after you've written this story) won't weird you out. But I just want to say I am absolutely speechless with your work. I love this so much, the way you framed Minseok’s and Jongdae's perspective was done really well. And I really like that you added Jongdae's POV in here. It really helped me grasp his problems and struggles better, and along the way you made me root for him, so that he can persevere and live. The way you paced the growth of their relationship was really great too, I found comfort that they had each other, and they made things work.

Thank you for using your brilliant talent and shedding a better light to the mental issues that people face. What a masterpiece. Thank you for writing.
FlowerBaozi
#2
Chapter 5: Thank you for this story. Bravo
Jessoflo92 #3
Chapter 5: Thank you
JinjinMarshmallow
#4
Chapter 5: Wow this was truly so good I'm in awe
Although I don't know much about this subject I feel like you portrayed this really well and all the feelings are so well described I could,,, well,,, feel them too (I'm redundant tchh)
And I really appreciate the fact that even tho jongdae has to deal with his issues, he's still trying to get better and do things he likes ! There's this rayof hope and it kinda,,, warms my heart
Thank you for this beautiful story and you really did a good job !! ♡
aquakittie
#5
Chapter 5: This was amazing... the detail you put into this, and how they didn't kid themselves... minseok was understanding, and jongdae didn't try to hide it. They were straight forward in their feelings, and whatever they thought.
Minseok made him feel things that jongdae never that he could. Even the part, it amazed him because he didn't even think he could feel that way, but he did...
Minseok helped him, was understanding that he would need time, that they both would. That it easy okay for jongdae to feel like that, that he would be there to help pick him back up when needed...
I liked that
Very well written and definitely a reread er.
NJsakura #6
Chapter 5: Thank you for writing this
Swolosheep
#7
I feel honoured to be the first person to read your story. It's less angst than I'm used to form you, but beautiful nonetheless. Keep up the good work! <3
JinjinMarshmallow
#8
Chapter 2: omo im pleasantly surprised to see this will continue for 3 more chapiters !!! //// I really liked the one-shot and itwas so mysterious, i'm really glad this story will developppppppppp i'm here for it ehee
their relationship sure is,,, special ahahaha