One, Two, Three Lies

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In a hollow night, a cramped, dingy attic was lit up by the moonlight; silhouette of the curtainless window towering the old, wooden wall like a looming monster. And there Im Nayeon was seated, almost immobile, the only sign she wasn’t a perfectly carved sculpture but a real human was the subtle rose of her chest as she breathe.

 

 She sat like she was compressed; back straight, two loose fists on her lap and knees glued with each other. The absence of emotion on her countenance was almost uncanny, like her soul had been dry. But she was conscious, well aware of her surrounding and… and scared.

 

She wasn’t entirely sure for how long she had been there. It could have been hours, it could have been seconds; like the concept of foggy dream after one gruesome day.

 

Despite that, she knew this was real. It wasn’t a dramatic play inside her head, where the vampire save the girl and the girl save the vampire. That was wonderland but this was real.

 

Then there was a creak from behind her, a thud and the crisp brisk of October breeze assaulted her nape; the forms of notices that told a new presence had appeared to join her. The presence she had been waiting for.

 

Nayeon shivered, feeling her already tensed shoulder became even tenser. Her slow breath shuddered when a pad of finger trailed along the line of her collarbone, going further inside her satin, white dress, pausing at where her heart was.

 

“Choose.”

 

The voice induced goosebumps, and sent statistic on her ears. It was an insufferable cold; both the voice and the wind.

 

Nayeon stayed mum, merely moving her head for a small shake of reluctance. Her stoic expression faltered just a bit, the corner of her lips quivered as she gulped back the scream that insisted to come out.

 

But Tzuyu wouldn’t have any of it.

 

The shabby dollhouse she had been staring hardly since the beginning was replaced with sharp, blue eyes, ones that resembled owl’s hunting for its prey, except that the owl had caught its mice long before. She clenched her hands tighter, trembling on her seat, trying so hard not to look away.

 

“Choose.” Her chapped lips formed, because Nayeon had lost her ability to hear; her heart hammered against her ribcages so loud she didn’t respond.

 

Then she was titled, her feet no longer attached with the floor and a pair of strong arms barricaded her into the chair as it stood on its two legs. She gasped and, instinctively, reached for a support; her dainty fingers wrapped around elbows. Still no sound did she make, refused to let some out. And when T

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Eizen1225 #1
Chapter 5: So this is the prequel of Of beach stars-- TT a tear slipped my eyes.. I read this even with my work tomorrow. Because I just really can't wait, my past free time during weekends were spent doing academic related. I wanna say the ending part is heartbreaking.. their love wasn't even toxic in the first place- so it seems SO unfair that inevitable circumstances just had to separate them :< I love satzu and I do love their story of unconditional love, love through sickness and health.. but mitzu's like the healthy kind of love so it was ashame that it happened.. *the only thing is Mina wasn't brave enough to insist she will fight with Tzuyu through everything- maybe because they're used to have each other in better situations- while Satzu's love happened during the storm- that's why I kinda prefer it * BUT THE STORY ARE BOTH WELL WRITTEN- VERY WORTH IT OF MY ANOTHER DAY OF BEING LATE.. I NEVER REGRET ANY SECONDS OF READING THIS THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING ♡ definitely gonna read the only one left like a steak *deliberately*
Eizen1225 #2
My heart at Of beach stars-- wouldn't stop thumping hard esp at almost the last part. I know they're gonna die but the fact they didn't die alone (I mean tzuyu didn't have to wait) gave me some comfort at least. Very well written so beautiful.. you relayed things well shortly and very well - I almost tear up.. if THANK YOU FOR THIS ♡
Eizen1225 #3
I thank my poor memory on not remembering what the stories about. The only thing I remember is I loved this story and that I've read this before. What a great story-- you very much sent me the feels in this stories ♡ RARE TO READ ANY GREAT SATZU FICS NOW SO IM ALWAYS GLAD TO HAVE A LOT TO LOOK BACK AND READ AGAIN- ESP THIS ♡ THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS
2ezfortzuyu_
#4
Chapter 2: I love your stories so much. They're so beautiful and captivating. I was so immersed that i actually cried at the end xD Your stories are so unique and you're such an amazaing writer ! I wish you all the best and thank you so much <3
PolarIce9 #5
Chapter 2: This is so beautiful (ಥ﹏ಥ)
The way you write this to make its ending give 2 different feels is just amazing (>w< )
Thank you author-nim!
jinnyjjh
#6
Chapter 2: This wrecked me so damn good (or bad, idk).
I hate unhappy-endings. Yet I love beautiful angst.
And this SaTzu-angst is beyond beautiful.
Thank you...
OnePotatoTwoPotato #7
Chapter 2: kk im bawling my eyes out at this chapter (╥﹏╥) I just discovered this now while browsing through aff and im- a ing mess. Its so good.
Mina_tozaki29
#8
Chapter 2: Your story its very beautiful you've make me cry :'( I love satzu.
paintted-scars
#9
Chapter 2: im crying :'( this is too beautiful
Lost_once
#10
Chapter 1: Whoa, the first chapter blew me away. You had a very cinematographic description (if you know what I mean). Reading your first story is like watching a romance movie.