thank you for your love

Description

You should never forget that love may not last forever.

Foreword

Long time ago I had this idea and finally I decided to write it. I hope you'll like a short angsty suchen story ^^

If you happen to like it then please, share your opinion whether you liked it or not

 

Enjoy ^^

Anmeela

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taratata #1
Chapter 1: I want to know what happen to jongdae, dont made him suffer more please
godspeed1
#2
Chapter 1: i feel like there's a lump stuck in my throat as i read this.. hurts so much. poor chenchen.
arcana_crown #3
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD!! UPDATE PLEASE. Im crying so hard right now
coconut_juice_
#4
WHY DID I JUST FIND THIS NOW?! OMG PART 2222 WHERE? OMFG JONGDAE MY HEART *GASPS* ING HELL I HATE JOONMYEON HERE WTF THIS IS SO GOOD
absuholute
#5
Chapter 1: I came back to this cause it slipped my mind that the second part is yet to be posted and I just flipped yet again because Jongdae. I'm scared for him. I whimper as well because yes, though I love Krisho, I am angry at Junmyeon's infidelity in this story. I'm worried that karma would punish him doubly for it I swear JD is a walking time bomb I am really scared. Hnng.

To the constructive part of my comment~ I love how it had become so painful in an imploding kind of way til the end of the first part. The first few paragraphs (intro/ build-up) is a little bit too narrative, though. Hmmm... I know it'd make the story longer as it is but maybe little bits and pieces where the reader can be "envious" of suchen's happiness in the past?

Anyway, I'll be keeping tabs on this and I look forward to (even though I'm totally at wit's end theorizing what would happen next) and I hope that this won't be tagged as tragic in the future. So far, good job on the first half and wait for me to scream at the second.

Thank you so much for sharing this! <3
Mhtbleach
#6
Chapter 1: OMG, my poor baby *cries*

Where is the prince on the white horse to save this damsel in distress?
Chenchenlay #7
Chapter 1: What ??? Eh..Aren't u feel sorry ( even a tiny,small, little ) sorry for my baby ?
taratata #8
Chapter 1: i cried..but now i have something to be waiting for,,this story is good,,and i have read your other story too...thank you so much...