Forty Minutes

Description

 

Chance likes to bring two people together, and then Chance likes to watch them fall in love.

 

 

This story is going to a very light hearted one and the plot is very simple.  The main focus of it is directed towards the development of the characters more.  Where it takes place is somewhere in Canada .. so just pretend that korean things are just that common.  :)

 

Wherever you see "___", put your name.

 

Your love interest:

 

(Yes, I just wanted to put pictures of G-Dragon)

 

There's two POV's, so I hope you dont get too confused.

The blue is Jiyong's POV while the red is your POV.

 

The left justified, normal font is what is happening or other factly things,

 and then the right justified, italicized font is what's going on in the characters' heads.

 

There iss some language, but it's not too often, i dont think.  But if this much means that it's supposed to be rated M, someone please let me know.  Tyy.

Foreword

Hey y'all.  This is my first fanfic, so please tell me what you think.  Constructive criticism is highly welcome!

It's going to be a short story, I think.  But at the pace I'm going at .. maybe not that short, haha.  I tend to overwrite.  But hey, more for you to consume?

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trishie_ann
#1
Chapter 6: Haha, your chapters are amusing - puppies? what does that even have to do with anything? LOL. Btw, ur little VIP rant is daebak!!!
jessicatee
#2
Btw, new title: Forty Minutes. Like it? There's a chance that ill change it again though, just because I'm really fickle with titles and names.
(Sidenote: "fourty" makes so much more sense to me ... But I guess its "forty".)
jessicatee
#3
Okay! I've outlined the next chapter. Its gonna be really short. Unfortunately, but it'll be out in the next few days hopefully!!
jessicatee
#4
omg im so lazy. sorry for the wait guuys! :(
janeul
#5
IT CAME IT CAMEE!!!!! bwahaha ert ert but you had to water it down with dogs.. sigh xD haha jess sometimes i really wonder.. just think "how did this happen" haha BUT CONGRATS!!!!!!!!! 16 SUBSCRIBERS!!!!! ~ lol like the update unnie! you dont know how much i giggled and laughed. :O i wonder whats going to happen next... UPDATE UPDATE!!!
jessicatee
#6
thank you, thank you, you're far too kind. (linkin park .. haha. x) )
Iheartlife #7
Awesome! Ji is so hot
/shot
krismealways
#8
omg, i love jiyong's thoughts.
please update soon ^__^!!
jessicatee
#9
LOL THANKS.
uhhhhhh, no. :(
pegglasus
#10
HAHAHAH HE'S SO ERTED!! u should update more :)