Part Two: What You Required

On Shifting Sand
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Rifle gripped tight in hand, Eunji eased her way out from behind the van and headed for the downed craft. She knew that she should be leaving the scene; the crawlers were bound to be there soon to iinvestigate the loss of the craft. But she had to know if her fellow fighters were alive. 

She found Wonshik first, lying in the mouth of the alleyway, the burning craft just beyond him and clogging the entrance. He lay facedown, unmoving, but she had to be sure. A quick check for a pulse and she confirmed it, he was dead, and though she felt callous, she knew she had to move on and leave his body. She didn't even shed tears, she was so used to seeing friends die that she felt as if she couldn't cry anymore. 

She took his rifle and his extra ammunition rounds, then moved on the downed craft, her own AK-47 raised and trained on where the cockpit was. It was a strange shape, she knew from experience; large enough to fit one of the bugs but curved, making them sit inside the craft like a roly poly bug curled halfway in on itself.

The sound of chattering in an unknown language nearly made her jump out of her skin, and she crouched hidden underneath the craft for a moment before she realized that it wasn't a squad of the creatures coming toward her. The sound was coming from inside the craft, and that meant the pilot was still alive. She grit her teeth and steadied herself, then jumped out of the shadows and turned to fire inside of the cockpit. 

Her bullets broke through the remaining pieces of windshield and into the crawler, and only when it was very obviously dead did she cease fire. It must have been calling more of its people to tell the location, and with that , she knew she had to hurry. She began to turn away when movement inside the cockpit caught her eye.

She spun back, rifle raised and finger on the trigger, only to find that it was a strange silvery metal flowing down the dead alien's arm toward the control interface. Curiousity took over, because if she had thought about it, she never would have done it, but she reached out and touched the liquid with her gloved hand. To her surprise it did not coat her fingers, and instead changed its trajectory and flowed into her hand, quickly forming into a cube the size of an apple. She stood staring at the oddity, wondering what in the world she was holding, when she heard the tramp of an incoming crawler squad.

Shoving the cube into her pocket - she would figure out what to do with it later - she squeezed past the wreckage and into the alleyway. She found Bomi's body quickly, nearly unrecognizable, and though she was saddened by the loss of her friend, she relieved her of her rifle and ammunition as well and hurried away.

She was several streets gone when the crawlers arrived, hurrying back toward the ERF base as safely as she could manage. The dead pilot's message must have been for more backup, though, because as she rounded a corner of what used to be a bank, she saw a squad of the aliens headed her way. They saw her, too, and she let out a curse as they swung their

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minyoungunnie #1
Chapter 9: I'M BAWLING MY EYES OUT OHMYGOD
BUT I LOVED IT
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 9: That ending was really great, and the way Eunji and Ken worked together to achieve this victory was wonderful. He really was a cool machine and very helpful in everything, and her sacrifice was well worth it. Thank you for writing this story. It was very enjoyable to read♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 7: Oh, man. The realization of love was sweet, and the times they had together were wonderful. It's too bad she hadn't been able to tell Taekwoon how she really felt. This was a really sad chapter!
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 4: I had to be hard for her to break the news of Bomi's death to Hongbin, and I feel bad for him. It once again brings back the reminder that this is a war, and that comes with losing loved ones. It must be difficult to not become complacent, and I love how you're bringing that out here.
The scene with Taekwoon was sweet and it helps them both to cope with this and find comfort in one another. It was nice;). And I like that you didn't add , since it would have taken away from the story, in this case.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 3: This story is turning out really nicely! I love that the cube is an entity of its own, and it...he...cracks me up with his mannerisms and cluelessness. The ears made me laugh, too!
I feel bad for Eunji, though. It has to be hard to live in this new existence of fear and uncertainty. I hope it won't be too much to handle. At least she has Ken now!
contaminated
#6
Chapter 9: Oooh, if you ask me to be honest I will tell you that this story had me shooketh. I love how you wrote with realism. Oh my god why is realism so rare in scifi fics. But either way, I loved this. Everything, from the opening deaths to how you described the actions of Eunji and the other characters, was just spot on. I must say that the best part was the end; when Eunji sacrificed her life, and then the epilogue of course. Humans are tenacious individuals indeed.
Amalya
#7
Chapter 9: Honestly, I would say this was more of a bittersweet story. Of course it had sad elements and the sweet moments were hardly enough to counterbalance those, but the overarching message and the ending theme... those were very positive things. I'm a bit perturbed we never discovered who the informant was *grumble grumble* but I suppose it doesn't matter in the end. Not with the way that everything ended.

I definitely felt for Eunji and Taekwoon, but especially for Ken, ironically enough. Though just a tool, he came off as more of a child to me, learning and growing and eventually beginning to understand what would ultimately happen. Teaching him to be human was both a kindness and a curse. Poor thing. But, as sad as the ending was, more or less, I found it highly satisfying. It showcases the very best of humans right after the very worst in them. And the epilogue grants hope - ignorant of the true victory they had - but there is a future because of one person and her tool.

Excellent entry for the contest and congratulations on winning! It was a good read and not half as heart-rending as I was potentially expecting. haha Well done and also congrats for tackling new elements (sci-fi and female protagonist) with such success. :D
Amalya
#8
Chapter 2: Well. I certainly didn't expect that opener and you were correct in explaining that it wasn't going to be happy, but I am strangely delighted with this chapter though. Her... partner(?) is quite entertaining, and I know it's not trying to be, but the situation is just amusing. Minus the enemies and being trapped and now alone and all that. I also chuckled at her ERFian comment. You do well with adding bits of levity into more serious situations and it works wonders. Nicely done! Now on to more! :D
DGNA_Forever
#9
Congratulations on your win with this story in the War and Peace contest! I am so looking forward to reading it, when my own contest ends♡.
asdfghjkyubutt
#10
Chapter 9: This story had me kicking in the air for no absolute reason lol this is pure awesomeness. No one will be able to predict the end of this story if they don't read the entire series. Surely this story went to a direction I've never expected before but who cares about my preference it's still Sooooo Great™, I swear, definitely one of my favs! Anyways thank you so much for writing this story, you really did a great job on creating such an emotional roller-coaster within the action-war-scifi theme, I really appreciate it!! ♥