Okay , first things first , dude , you rock !!! ^_^ I fell in love with this story ever since I first laid my eyes on them

This is cool! I hope that you still continue on writing it. ^^

New reader! ^.^ this sound soo cool!

Omg I love the way you describe the story and you haven't reaveled who the dude is yet. This is a very interesting story. Waahhh<br />
Updateeee SOOOONN

You first chapter seems really well put together like no joke. You are good at describing people and you're sentences are very well constructed. I know one thing your story seems interesting. But I think it is somewhat rushed in a way I can't really explain it but I see what you are trying to do.<br />
Are you trying to make the interesting parts just come out quick. <br />
Same thing I did on my first chapter.<br />
:D <3 Please don't delete it ^^ Update SOOOOOON

No no don't delete it if any thing just renew it and make the description sound more interesting. Do things to promote your fanfic it actually sounds good so far.<br />
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SHINeeSaranghae98 hwaiting!

I might delete this after all.