{마스크 ; mask } ❀ | ✸ {빵 ; zero} : reviews updated on 15-04

{마스크 ; mask } ❀ you don't know me. | {빵 ; zero} ✸ watch me do it. : thank you to the ones who stayed till the end of this journey! i'm sorry!
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{마스크 ; mask } ❀ | ✸ {빵 ; zero} = 2 } ❀ the ex-idol: o1
❀ the ballerina: o0
❀ the secret: o1
❀ the beauty: o0 turtle27 ; the ex-idol ; choi miyoung ; wang jackson hello hello grace! i'm really sorry for the long wait, thank you so much for applying for mask, i was afraid no one would like the ex-idol plotline /sobs/ so here i am to talk about miyoung! first of all i like her quote and the way she woul d hate to be emily-lee, like who would think of that joke? so funny! XP i really like how you describe her appearance, like she is nowhere near perfection yet she is natural so i'm sure she caught everyone's eyes on her previous debut. about her tattoo, it made me feel sad, like something bad happened with her mother... and omg! yes! a tomboy! thank you bae <3 i wanted someone like that here! :p though she will have to up to her style a little since mask is the y group xp i really like her personality, i love tomboys honestly because i want them to transform and people to notice how gorgeous they are for being carefree people and friendly! i think she would have an hard time fitting in but that is the funny part! aww her past is so sad in a way ;; but  see how it made her who she is now, her father, her sister and even moa (i never head of that group ahah i did some research /slapped/). her family's relations are all good, but just tell me something, her oldest sister is a lawyer? of course her stagename is okay! i think you might need to change her twins because she is not a main dancer, hyoyeon might be too strong and amber is not a lead vocalist though she made a solo debut so i think i can accept that, but you will really need to change the rap twin because yura is girls day's rapper not sub-rapper when miyoung is not a rapper. how did she become
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I'm sorry to everyone, specially the ones who loved this as much as I did. Growing up sometimes ;;

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EveryJae6
#1
Chapter 10: No, it's alright! Life happens. Thank you for telling us :) Fighting!
ItonamiKanmi
#2
Chapter 10: It's alright. Thank you for informing us. Good luck and fighting!
lilshocker8
#3
Chapter 10: That's alright, real life happens <3 Thank you so much for taking the time to be honest with us about what happened, so many authors just vanish and you're left to wonder what's going on. I wish you good luck in life and whatever you choose to do with it <3
fullmoon_134340
#4
Chapter 10: Honestly, I'm pretty sure all of us will go through that so don't worry! I really apreciate that you took the time to tell us. In the mean time...
Fighting!
Layni17
#5
Chapter 10: It's alright! Really, I think all of us will get to that point someday so it's really no problem. I hope that things can become easier and better for you!
EveryJae6
#6
Chapter 3: Heya, so I just finished editing! I changed the twins, and I actually put none for the rapping twin because the ex-idol plotline doesn't have any rapping position. I changed the clothing story to a restaurant chain, so yeah. I also changed her trainee time in sts to half a year instead of half a month. I think I meant to put half a year originally, because half a month is pretty unreasonable, even if she was a former idol. Oh, I deleted her 2014-2015 predebut activities as well as her appearance in Taeyang's video
Okay! There you go, and if there's any other problems, then please let me know!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1117192
EveryJae6
#7
Chapter 3: *facepalm* Umm, sooo... this is like the 3rd time I've deleted my comment and commented again xD
Okay, first of all, thank you so much for the awesome review! I'm glad you took the time to read all of it in detail ^^
So, yes, her oldest sister is a lawyer. Is that okay?
And yeah, I definitely see what you mean when you said I needed to change the twins. I have a few others in mind to replace them. I'm also a fan of tomboys! So that's why I chose Amber for the vocals xP I do have another soloist in mind though, so that's all good ^^
And sorry for not making sense in that part about her pre debut things! I was making multiple applicants at the time, and so I may have mixed a few in that part. I'll review all of it though to make sure nothing else got mixed up, and if it did, I'll tell you about it!
I'll comment again once I've finished revising it! It might take a few hours from now since it's the end of school right now, and I need to do some homework. Thank you again for the review!
ItonamiKanmi
#8
Chapter 3: Thanks for the lovely review! Glass is not a fashion company, actually. It has a lot of different departments such as the gaming department that Miran's brother is in charge of. Glass has almost about everything you can ever think of, but it is most famous for it's luxurious resorts and hotels. Hope that helps clear things up! ^^
UrangUtang
#9
Chapter 9: Aaaah it's Solbi! Omg that banter with Nick was perfect ;A; And poor Lan and Minseo that have to put up with Sol's impatience and inability to teach D: Really that was such a fun chapter and I'm really glad you liked my little weirdo and chose her <3 <3
Layni17
#10
Chapter 9: Congrats congrats congrats!