Chapter 1: Yayyy, you're back! I don't think you know how many times I searched up bamboo cereal on Aff, hoping it would come back. Glad to have you here :)
Chapter 12: I've picked up the review, thank you so much. Your review meant a lot to me, it's interesting hearing it from the view of someone like you. Since this story was the first one I've ever written, your feedback was much-needed. I'm glad you pointed out my error during the basketball matchup, that one could've been my downfall. For the magic brownies part, I guessed I should've thought about it more, but I can't seemed to think how I should write it in. Making Suho smoked it just didn't seem appropriate then.
Anyway, I will credit your shop in the foreword ASAP. Thank you again for your time and your thoughts, I appreciate it so much.
Chapter 11: I'm sorry for I'm inconveniencing you with my late pick-up. I'm sick, so I won't respond as fast or as lengthy as I usually do. Thank you for your review, and you definitely gave me some things to think about! There are a few pointers I would discuss with you (Jungkook's illogical behavior and his unwillingness to face his friend because of the humiliation), but I can't without giving away his secret. But all the better, your thoughts about these events are something I will focus on in the future! I believe that's all I have to say for now and I will return if I have questions for you. Thank you again! I'll be crediting soon!
Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Thank you for the review! It's definitely going to help me as I continue writing in the future. Thank you so much for noticing all the research I put in (because I did a lot). As for the grammar, I just transitioned into using Microsoft word after years of using notepad (i'm kind of slow on the uptake) so I'll be going back and proofreading pretty soon. As I'm sure there are a few mistakes, as you've pointed out. Anyways, thanks for the review. I'll be crediting as soon as I can. :)
I didn't know whether to PM you about this or not, so I'll leave a comment instead: Can I have the option of having a non-graded review? Unless you prefer to grade, then that's fine too. No worries.
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