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Motherless Child 고아
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It was snowing heavily. The wind gusted with mighty speed. He looked out the window with blank eyes. His doctor's coat sat at the top of his chair. He took a glimpse at his expensive watch and crossed his arms behind his head. He stared at the wall with an expression that couldn't be read. The projector displayed its contents on the white wall. 

"Woah, look at this! It's cute, isn't it?" a young female voice exclaimed. He sighed. 

"Yah, put it down. We're not getting it. Put it down." a male bored voice came into the scene. Rattling sounded in the video. The man sighed again. He rubbed his face. Stuble was steadily growing around his lower jaw. 

DING!

His phone sounded. He looked at it, and grabbed it. He groaned as he read the message. His eyes rolled to the back of his head. The door busted open. A young, heaving doctor appeared.

"Seonsaegnim-"

"Close the door." he said with monotone. The doctor's mouth drop in agitation. 

"But-" he sighed and slammed the door shut. A couple seconds later, he knocked, "There's an emergency!" he yelled with urgency. The doctor got up, and grabbed his doctor's coat.

"Hani ah! Stay still please!" Geumhee commanded holding her imfamous camera. Hani giggled as she moved around the house with Christmas decorations. She wasn't allowed to walk faster than her regular pace. She paused. 

"Aigoo, why did you kick mommy?" Hani looked down at her enlarged stomach. She rubbed it with a loving look. She looked around the house in awe. It was filled with bright lights of green and red. Suddenly, cries erupted

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MAT-thesilentpoet #1
Chapter 4: I love this fanfic so much. It's a shame there are only a few chapters. I hope you find your muse to continue this intricate and intriguing story, Author.
grammey #2
This has the makings of a good story if it was about someone else. Playful Kiss was about Baek Seungjo and Oh HaNi and to kill off Oh HaNi is not being fair to the followers of this series. It seems to be an easy way out rather than developing your own characters. It’s easy to predict that Seungjo will have reverted to a cold unemotional man after losing the person who made him human. This new person will then be another version of Oh HaNi destined to save him and his family. TOO predictable. From what I have read so far, you have some writing skills and I encourage you to develop your own storyline and characters.
yanibel1001 #3
Chapter 5: Comeback soon~ :'( I'll wait forma you
Fighting!
Deasy_ayue
#4
Chapter 5: i hope u update soon ... dont forget about us okay!!
i'll be waiting for u-- fightingg!!
chae_eum
#5
Are you planning to update this story anytime soon?