Interrogation: The Confession of The Innocent

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Luhan was accused of Oh Sehun's death. Luhan denied, he insisted he's innocent. Detective Zhang Yixing's here to find out if Luhan's telling the truth through an interrogation.

 

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TRAILER

 

 

 

Foreword

 

AN EXCERPT FROM

INTERROGATION

THE CONFESSION OF THE INNOCENT

 

 

 

 

"Believing is a choice. You either live peacefully based on a lie or live miserably from the truth."

 

 

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12: 04 AM, December 25th

"Breaking news. Celebrity, Oh Sehun, has been reported dead in his home on the night of 24th of December, few hours before Christmas."

Flashing red and blue lights from police cars and an ambulance concerned the whole neighbourhood. Instead of enjoying themselves on the joyous occasion with their loved ones, they were outside their houses, distracted from celebrating their feast on Christmas Eve, worried for their famous neighbor.

‘What happened?’ most of them thought.

“He’s dead?” most of them gasped in shock with unexplainable fear in their eyes after hearing the news.

Commotion began when an ambulance team came out rolling a stretcher with a body covered with white cloth to their vehicle from a house—Oh Sehun’s house. Cameramen and reporters around ran to the team to get a good look at the body with their shameless cameras, but police officials blocked them away from the confidential scene.

Shocked, people around had their jaws dropped, gasping, after recognizing the broad shoulders and the long figure lying under the thin white cloth on a stretcher. Indeed, it was the rising star, Oh Sehun.

The news came like fire, invading TV channels, flooding social media feeds—spoiling everyone’s celebration. The news was unbearable, especially to his truest fans, who couldn’t do anything but wept for the fallen actor behind their screens. Everyone was clueless why such a thing happened.

Suddenly, a silhouette. A familiar silhouette walked out from the main doors of Sehun’s home, putting everyone in silence. Reporters reported and recorded everything they were seeing, journalists took pictures of every movement that was taking place. He was calm, walking calmly as possible even with two police officers gripping his upper arms tight. He showed no weakness, no emotion, because every movement he chose to do, everyone had something to say about it.

However, as soon as they got nearer the police car, people noticed he was muttering to the police officers. The crowd couldn’t hear their indistinct conversation because of the loud noise that came from sirens and from the loud crowd. Questions started raising around with the exact same thought.

Did Luhan, the man that walked out, killed his co-star, or who was more likely known as his best friend?

Luhan’s brows and lips were tensed with anger, but his eyes said differently.

One from the crowd overheard Luhan’s conversation with one of the police officers, “Believe me, I’m innocent.”

The cop replied, "That'll be settled through an interrogation, boy."

 

 

 

 

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INTERROGATION: THE CONFESSION OF THE INNOCENT

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Honorable mention on Barcode Writing Contest (with category: Believe)

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Unfortunately, the translator deactivated her account

 

 

 

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INTERROGATION: THE CONFESSION OF THE INNOCENT
is an original one-shot story written by JaeKnight. No plagiarizing.

Published on December 5 2015 / Finished on December 25 2015


1st Revision by JaeKnight on December 30 2015
2nd Revision by Lunaira on July 30 2016
3rd Revision by
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4th revision by JaeKnight on May 6 2020

 

 

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JaeKnight 2015 (c) Foreword updated on Sept 2019

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teenietinie #1
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Moon-Walker
#2
Chapter 3: Oh my God, how can I forget about it. Damn I remembered, I had read this but decided to leave a comment after reading it again. I will leave my comment soon.
And please invite me!? Thank you ~<3
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anashins
#4
Okay, so... wow!! I didn't have any expectations when I started this, I was just looking for nice psychological stuff with great twists - and I didn't get disappointed!

Usually, I have to read such stuff several times, because I tend to overlook important things - but now that I read it 2-3 times, I'm like how could I miss all these hints?? haha You weaved them in very nicely, nothing gave away too much :) Even though I had a feeling that Lay was behaving weird and very unprofessional from the beginning, you got me there!

I love how twisted Luhan's character was as he indeed went "Believing is a choice", and he could twist and turn his life into everyone's he wanted to be. Also, the fact that he killed Lay because he was so happy and innocent despite being an orphan, and Luhan finally imagining him a life he would have probably never be able to live in this lifetime as well as the nice wrap-up with the last scene that ties on the first scene again? Perfect!
TheSugarLlama #5
Chapter 3: Could you please invite me? This was really great and I would love to understand it more. Thank you!
Wanderer_bj
#6
Chapter 3: Just when i think i got it i know what would have happened.... you twist it.. like really wasn't expecting that. Great story!!! And i would love to read explanation.
oceanscapes #7
Chapter 3: it's been so long since I read anything on aff my attention span won't let me lmao but this is crazy

it's 2am and I read each and every word carefully e even though im a skip-reader, this is really on another level, I need to know the explanation tho Im so confused why did he kill lay??
kpopluver3
#8
Chapter 3: Please invite me so I can better understand the story. Many thanks <3
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