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Interrogation: The Confession of The Innocent
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JAE'S NOTE(S):
09.25.2019. I reread. I do not take all the credit in writing this. I thank Slammed and Lunaira for helping my lazy bum to polish the grammar and technical stuff in this one-shot. Unfortunately, they have deactivated. I also thank the reviewers who reviewed this and corrected some of my grammatical errors back in the day.

05.06.2020 Revised it myself!

LUNAIRA'S NOTE:
07.30.2016. I just finished revising and editing Jae's story at around 3 AM, so yeah, I just had the urge to add myself into Jae's author's notes here xD
It was an honor for me that Jae trusted me enough to go back and do some revision to Jae's story [fixing grammatical and sentence structures (some tenses may be off (sorry, tenses are my weak points)), changing words here and there for better diction and rephrasing stuff for better imagery]. This is my favorite one-shot of all time, and it's the exact same story as before. Jae just let me polished it up. More tahnk

 

 

 

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teenietinie #1
Chapter 3: hi there, can you please invite me? this story was absolutely amazing and i'd love to understand it more!!
Moon-Walker #2
Chapter 3: Oh my God, how can I forget about it. Damn I remembered, I had read this but decided to leave a comment after reading it again. I will leave my comment soon.
And please invite me!? Thank you ~<3
Lily_B #3
Chapter 3: Could you please invite me?!! I'd really like to understand the story further 🙂
anashins #4
Okay, so... wow!! I didn't have any expectations when I started this, I was just looking for nice psychological stuff with great twists - and I didn't get disappointed!

Usually, I have to read such stuff several times, because I tend to overlook important things - but now that I read it 2-3 times, I'm like how could I miss all these hints?? haha You weaved them in very nicely, nothing gave away too much :) Even though I had a feeling that Lay was behaving weird and very unprofessional from the beginning, you got me there!

I love how twisted Luhan's character was as he indeed went "Believing is a choice", and he could twist and turn his life into everyone's he wanted to be. Also, the fact that he killed Lay because he was so happy and innocent despite being an orphan, and Luhan finally imagining him a life he would have probably never be able to live in this lifetime as well as the nice wrap-up with the last scene that ties on the first scene again? Perfect!
TheSugarLlama #5
Chapter 3: Could you please invite me? This was really great and I would love to understand it more. Thank you!
Wanderer_bj #6
Chapter 3: Just when i think i got it i know what would have happened.... you twist it.. like really wasn't expecting that. Great story!!! And i would love to read explanation.
oceanscapes #7
Chapter 3: it's been so long since I read anything on aff my attention span won't let me lmao but this is crazy

it's 2am and I read each and every word carefully e even though im a skip-reader, this is really on another level, I need to know the explanation tho Im so confused why did he kill lay??
kpopluver3 #8
Chapter 3: Please invite me so I can better understand the story. Many thanks <3
kim_ella #9
Chapter 3: Could you please invite me? I want to understand this story better
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