The Promise

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title: The Promise

author: Pearlescent

male lead(s): kim jongin (kai)

status: complete

genre: slice of life, shortfic

warning: is mentioned. lol i dont know if that would be a warning though.

commentary: this is a really old fic that i really appreciate. it's based off the author's real experience, and it's quite realistic (obvious lols). it's short, but i don't think i would've wanted it longer or shorter. i think she grasped her points perfectly and damn the author must've had one of a romantic line, just saying. it's definitely a pleasant read. i haven't read any of her other fanfics yet, but becaused i decided to reread this, it makes me want to :)

160220 update: THIS STORY GOT FEATURED. /applauds/

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ahelpinghand #1
with your little notes in mind, i'll recommend a fantasy fic and an angst fic :D

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1014319/butterfly-girl-fantasy-fluff-romance-you-exo-exok-suho

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1027148/the-first-time-angst-fluff-romance-you-exo-exok-kai

hope you enjoy them!
Truly_Yours09 #2
I like to recommend a story :)) it has a few chapters up but the thirst is v real

A Rose for the Tainted Souls
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992148/a-rose-for-the-tainted-souls-action-drama-fantasy-romance-originalcharacter-exo
boicepika #3
Chapter 15: Girl calm down xD
JulietteA #4
Chapter 14: Hello, thank you for recommending Metamorphosis here :)

I wasn't really aware to have made that mistake, but I fixed it now.
Where there other mistakes you found that I could fix as well?

Yes, Metamorphosis is going to be a little long. I found it more logical that way, taken that there are 12 guys she needs to get to know and love. The action comes later, but I thought I still needed to add it into the tags.
What do you mean with initial traits?

Thank you, this really helped me a lot. Metamorphosis is my very first story and I am totally happy to get this feedback to improve my writing and plotting! Another reader told me personally that she finds that I describe too much, so when it gets back to the talking she forgets about the topic. Do you feel the same way maybe? :)

Again, thank you for this and reading Metamorphosis! I hope you will enjoy reading it in the future as well :D
Elen_a #5
Chapter 14: I'm glad you like it to recommend it at least :)
You should probably tell her the mistakes and your feedback directly~ If it's the same mistakes then she may not even realise to have made them, I think it's her first story or something, so it may help :D
mimimimi_ #6
Hi! Um, I want to rec my first fanfic - The Return of the B*tch. I hope you can drop comments and give your honest opinion since it my first time writing. And if it doesn't hit your taste, you can just ignore it :)

Here's the link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1081694/the-return-of-the-b-tch-romance-originalcharacter-exo-baekhyun-chanyeol

I hope you have a good day! :D
shesamytheu #7
Chapter 12: YES I'LL DO YOU A FAVOR AND READ THIS ;)
-Secret-Love- #8
YES. FINALLY~~~~~WOO !
Another library filled with EXOOOOO <333

A great friend of mine is writing a story right now and it ft. Choi Hye Min (OC), Chanyeol, and Lee Jae Hyuk. (The pairing is OCxChanyeol)
This story LITERALLY makes my heart clenches and plays with my feelings. TT^TT GAHHHH (my poor heart! ><)Please check it out sometime!!

My friend's AFF name is ---EXOTIC--- and the story is called "Diabolic Lover".
Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992908/diabolic-lover-angst-dark-mafia-romance-chanyeol-roykim

Thank you!! :>
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