Forgetting Park Chanyeol

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title: Forgetting Park Chanyeol

author: holdon

male lead(s): park chanyeol; a little of sehun, yixing, baekhyun

status: complete

genre: high school life

warning: um, there's like one or two ual scenes? and like a lot of ual comments

commentary: i finished this in like a day, aka today. it's basically about this girl getting over her 8 year long crush (damn girl, i would've given up). the title isn't eye catching, but i mean, it definitely suits the fanfic. i'm honestly surprised how this fanfic has less than 1000 subscribers though. maybe because the prologue is a bit clique... i almost left at the prologue. but it was worth it as you go on. there are a few connections that were really well plotted. i give kudos to the author.

just a few things that might bother you: perspectives changes from first person to third person. it may or may not confuse you. i didn't realize it until a few chapters in. there are a few mistakes but hey everyone makes them. it's overall, fun to read and definitely made my heart do flips.

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Truly_Yours09 #2
I like to recommend a story :)) it has a few chapters up but the thirst is v real

A Rose for the Tainted Souls
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992148/a-rose-for-the-tainted-souls-action-drama-fantasy-romance-originalcharacter-exo
boicepika #3
Chapter 15: Girl calm down xD
JulietteA
#4
Chapter 14: Hello, thank you for recommending Metamorphosis here :)

I wasn't really aware to have made that mistake, but I fixed it now.
Where there other mistakes you found that I could fix as well?

Yes, Metamorphosis is going to be a little long. I found it more logical that way, taken that there are 12 guys she needs to get to know and love. The action comes later, but I thought I still needed to add it into the tags.
What do you mean with initial traits?

Thank you, this really helped me a lot. Metamorphosis is my very first story and I am totally happy to get this feedback to improve my writing and plotting! Another reader told me personally that she finds that I describe too much, so when it gets back to the talking she forgets about the topic. Do you feel the same way maybe? :)

Again, thank you for this and reading Metamorphosis! I hope you will enjoy reading it in the future as well :D
Elen_a
#5
Chapter 14: I'm glad you like it to recommend it at least :)
You should probably tell her the mistakes and your feedback directly~ If it's the same mistakes then she may not even realise to have made them, I think it's her first story or something, so it may help :D
mimimimi_
#6
Hi! Um, I want to rec my first fanfic - The Return of the B*tch. I hope you can drop comments and give your honest opinion since it my first time writing. And if it doesn't hit your taste, you can just ignore it :)

Here's the link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1081694/the-return-of-the-b-tch-romance-originalcharacter-exo-baekhyun-chanyeol

I hope you have a good day! :D
shesamytheu
#7
Chapter 12: YES I'LL DO YOU A FAVOR AND READ THIS ;)
-Secret-Love-
#8
YES. FINALLY~~~~~WOO !
Another library filled with EXOOOOO <333

A great friend of mine is writing a story right now and it ft. Choi Hye Min (OC), Chanyeol, and Lee Jae Hyuk. (The pairing is OCxChanyeol)
This story LITERALLY makes my heart clenches and plays with my feelings. TT^TT GAHHHH (my poor heart! ><)Please check it out sometime!!

My friend's AFF name is ---EXOTIC--- and the story is called "Diabolic Lover".
Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992908/diabolic-lover-angst-dark-mafia-romance-chanyeol-roykim

Thank you!! :>