Metamorphosis

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title: Metamorphosis

author: JulietteA

recommended by: Elen_a

male lead(s): ot12

status: on-going

genre: supernatural (vampire), action (??? there's barely any so far) 

commentary: okay, this is going to be a longass fanfic, if you're into that. there's only about 20 chapters out and she just got through all the members like what? but there are a lot of people who are into long fanfics. i'm into it... if there's something to constantly to look forward to? the main reason why i recommend this fanfic though is because it does justice to all the members and not like most ot12 fanfics where you can already see that the oc has a favorite in the beginning. so, i am willing to see what the author has in for us. there are quite a few of the same grammatic and spelling mistakes that are constantly showing up which really bug me, but i'm not going to point it out in every single chapter she writes (if the author is reading this, dump should be changed to dumb in a few chapters. it's the main mistake that i kept on seeing). i think she is editing it though, since she changed the title and the character's name around midway of writing i believe.

i really can't say much about this fanfic.  other than, good characterization on the other members, the oc needs a little more plotting, and it's really slow (but i get it since there are twelve members). oh, and the oc changed too quickly??? i felt like her intial traits are hardly (som

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Truly_Yours09 #2
I like to recommend a story :)) it has a few chapters up but the thirst is v real

A Rose for the Tainted Souls
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992148/a-rose-for-the-tainted-souls-action-drama-fantasy-romance-originalcharacter-exo
boicepika #3
Chapter 15: Girl calm down xD
JulietteA
#4
Chapter 14: Hello, thank you for recommending Metamorphosis here :)

I wasn't really aware to have made that mistake, but I fixed it now.
Where there other mistakes you found that I could fix as well?

Yes, Metamorphosis is going to be a little long. I found it more logical that way, taken that there are 12 guys she needs to get to know and love. The action comes later, but I thought I still needed to add it into the tags.
What do you mean with initial traits?

Thank you, this really helped me a lot. Metamorphosis is my very first story and I am totally happy to get this feedback to improve my writing and plotting! Another reader told me personally that she finds that I describe too much, so when it gets back to the talking she forgets about the topic. Do you feel the same way maybe? :)

Again, thank you for this and reading Metamorphosis! I hope you will enjoy reading it in the future as well :D
Elen_a
#5
Chapter 14: I'm glad you like it to recommend it at least :)
You should probably tell her the mistakes and your feedback directly~ If it's the same mistakes then she may not even realise to have made them, I think it's her first story or something, so it may help :D
mimimimi_
#6
Hi! Um, I want to rec my first fanfic - The Return of the B*tch. I hope you can drop comments and give your honest opinion since it my first time writing. And if it doesn't hit your taste, you can just ignore it :)

Here's the link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1081694/the-return-of-the-b-tch-romance-originalcharacter-exo-baekhyun-chanyeol

I hope you have a good day! :D
shesamytheu
#7
Chapter 12: YES I'LL DO YOU A FAVOR AND READ THIS ;)
-Secret-Love-
#8
YES. FINALLY~~~~~WOO !
Another library filled with EXOOOOO <333

A great friend of mine is writing a story right now and it ft. Choi Hye Min (OC), Chanyeol, and Lee Jae Hyuk. (The pairing is OCxChanyeol)
This story LITERALLY makes my heart clenches and plays with my feelings. TT^TT GAHHHH (my poor heart! ><)Please check it out sometime!!

My friend's AFF name is ---EXOTIC--- and the story is called "Diabolic Lover".
Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/992908/diabolic-lover-angst-dark-mafia-romance-chanyeol-roykim

Thank you!! :>