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TWENTY ϟ JYP's Girl Trainees ϟ apply opena critique spot
plotline. THE STRAWBERRY
love interest. N/A
status. accepted / pending / rejected
username. coldgirl
plotline. the rainbow
love interest. n/a
status. accepted / pending / rejected
Hello there ara! Ara is a cute name is it? but lets just go to the review now xD
The basic looks good! i think squid is interesting! btw my guess is leonie having chinese ethnicity right? leonie lee is her english name, what about her chinese name and filipino name? i think i make you confused at ethnicity/nationality part-- am i? you don't need to be both filipino and singaporean. you can pick either one if you like.. but it's okay, it's cool that she's mix! but then somthing catch my attention.. her mother name is kind of chinese.. that 'cheng'. i guess her mother is a chinese who lived in filipino. if this is right, can you change her ethnicity as chinese?
JANEY IS A PRETTY MAKNAE AREN'T SHE?! BESIDES SHE'S TALL AND CURVY FOR SOMEONE YOUNG. I BELIEVE OUR LEONIE WILL GROWING PRETTIER! EVERYTHING IS FINE HERE. THE DESCRIPTION SUITS HER!
Her personality is good... but there're some parts where i get confused at. hmm.. i just can't figure it out but somethings seems out of place somehow... i understand though, often have proble with writing personality part too~ i especially like her background where you mentioned how bad she was in studies but strives harder for a better result! that shows how dedicated she is to succeed >< just wanna remind something.. less is more :)
alright, the rainbow is a triple threat- vocalist, dancer, rapper. she will be moderately good in the 3 areas, i think minzy is too good as a moderate dancer >< this is just a suggestion.. maybe you can use f(x)'s luna? I know she is a better singer but yeah..... i think minzy dancing is way too good for a triple threat xd btw--- goooood! janey's acting is amazing!!!
oh- twenty won't be reveal to the public yet, this won't be like sixteen.. they just going to lived and trained together until the times comes... xd somewhat like yg's style, groups of trainees being put in some unofficial groups. alright off with my long review! im sorry if i sounded harsh.... you're rejected for now. but dont worry! just fix the errors and you will be pending ^_^
username. LITTLEMISSTROUBLE
plotline. the vanilla
love interest. fill in info here
status. accepted / pending / rejected
hello! Thanks for applying mai! lets start the review now ^_^
So uh- the basic looks good!
Yeri and mijoo are both lovely though well, they're both not the visual of their original group right? wasnt it irene and yoo jiae? actually i was expecting yoo jiae as the face if you are going to choose someone from lovelyz xd i likes the fact that she is not fashionable and just leave everything to the stylist unnies. i guess she will usually ask help from them since she know shes bad in this (?)
HER PERSONALITY IS GOOD >< SHE SUITS THE PLOTLINE REALLY WELL! HER BACKGROUND TOO. THOUGH ITS LIKE... THERE'S NOTHING REALLY SPECIAL ABOUT HER RIGHT? I MEAN SHE IS JUST NORMAL, WHICH IS NOT BAD >< OVERALL SHE IS LIKE A SLOW ROLLERCOASTER, IM SURE PEOPLE WILL FIND HER UMPH IF THEY DIG HER DEEPER XD
IU having an angelic voice! i think she suits minyoung the best! CHA SONGJOO IS BAE.... *^* /CHUCKLES/
I CANT FIND ANYTHING BAD HERE..... :DD
plotline. THE ROCKY
love interest. DAY6'S YOUNG K
status. accepted / pending / rejected
hani~ hello hani~! thanks for applying! teehee... ill go to the review, without further ado, leggo!
I must say, all of the korean plotline are here except for the butter (?) xd i like her basic, really xd
say is such a rare faceclaim! but i must say it perfect as jiyeon! she looks different from ahyeon but thats whats great! she's the prettier sister i can feel that.. but people might also think ahyeon is the younger one if they go out together... ahyeon is baby faced uwu her fashion style is good, i can understand her preference.!
her personality part is good! her background part too. it suits the plotline *^* REALLY... I CAN UNDERSTAND HER A LOT EVEN WHEN THE PARAGRAPH WASNT THAT LONG. I THINK ITS VERY MADE ;;
SCREAMS BECAUSE YOU USED TWENTY MEMBERS AS FRIENDS >< AND HER FAMILY MEMBERS ARE TOTALLY SPOT ON!
ANW... FOR THE TALENT PART. ACTUALLY I WAS THINKING OF SOMEONE ELSE OTHER THAN KRYSTAL.
So shipping mr. brian kim and ms. baek jiyeon! ahyeon truly play big roles in jiyeon's life! i got a feeling that she will appear in the story for so many times <3
overall, just fix that errors i pointed out :P
username. sheerans
plotline. the vanilla
love interest. day6's dowoon
status. accepted / pending / rejected
hello! Thanks for applying maisie! lets start the review now ^_^
So uh- the basic looks good! but you might or not forget to fill in the nickname part?
real life snoW white.... tbh they both fit this description though sulli is definitely suitable as this ;;;; <3 the vanilla and girly style sounds compatible xd
gosh gosh gosh... now i can see how different my two vanilla applicants are! both girls are different from each other, i think its easier to pick up a character~ i like her character so much, an offending visual *^* i love the spices in her background! oh gosh... i think everything is well and i am totally happy with what i've read so far!
TZUYU AND JACKSON! UH... SO GLAD SHE CAN OPEN UP TO THEM THOUGH I REALLY WANT HER TO OPEN UP TO TWENTY MEMBERS IF SHE'S ACCEPTED--- WELL... LET'S SEE.
ALRIGHT, KRYSTAL AS HER TALENT OWO I MUST SAY THAT'S GREAT! KRYSTAL IS SUCH AN OVERRATED IDOL, ISNT SHE? BECAUSE OF HER FACE AND APPEARANCE, PEOPLE DONT KNOW THAT SHE'S THE LEAD VOCALIST d;
I MUST SAY I DONT KNOW DAY6 AS MUCH AS GOT7-- BUT I AM TRYING TO GET TO KNOW THEM AND MY APPLICANTS REALLY TEACH ME A LOT >< I LOVE 'SOME' RLS <3
LMAO 420. THIS COULD BE A GOOD VARIETY SHOW NAME FOR THIS GIRLS ^.~ ANW, YOU'RE PENDING! GOOD LUCK!
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