That's the way I love you.
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That's the way I love you.
BY OLLERIGOLLERI
MAIN CHARACTERS: MINO & IREN
GENRE: SLICE OF LIFE - FLUFF FAMILY
STATUS: COMPLETED
DESCRIPTION OF STORY: A ONE SHOT TELLING A MISUNDERSTANDING OCCURRED BETWEEN MINO AND HIS WIFE, IRENE. AND HOW THEIR SON MINGUK PLAYED A ROLE AS THEIR PEACEMAKER.
REQUESTED BY: OLLERIGOLLERI
REVIEWED BY: XXMYSTERUOUSXX
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GENRE: SLICE OF LIFE - FLUFF FAMILY
STATUS: COMPLETED
DESCRIPTION OF STORY: A ONE SHOT TELLING A MISUNDERSTANDING OCCURRED BETWEEN MINO AND HIS WIFE, IRENE. AND HOW THEIR SON MINGUK PLAYED A ROLE AS THEIR PEACEMAKER.
REQUESTED BY: OLLERIGOLLERI
REVIEWED BY: XXMYSTERUOUSXX
>> STORY LINK HERE
title of the story: 3/5
At first glance, I probably wouldn’t read it but it did spark some curiosity in me. Plus, the title had me singing Taylor Swift’s song.
description & foreword: 3/5
Your description is short and neat. It doesn’t give out much spoilers or information but it does gives out just enough for what the readers to expect.
appearance: 1/5
There’s nothing much to say but it’s simple and plain.
flow: 5/5
It’s not too fast or anything. It has a nice pace.
originality of plot: 1/5
I'm sorry but this plot has been used multiple times.
gammar & spelling: 3/5
Your’s There is no such thing as ‘your’s’, only ‘yours’. This can be found at the starting of your story. ·
Second paragraph ‘As usual, he would greet her in the kitchen, ‘hug’ her from behind and plant a kiss on the top of her head. ·
Tenses You keep mixing up your tenses. If you’re using past tense from the beginning then use it until the end. Change tenses only when necessary. ·
There are other grammar mistakes but it isn’t that much of an eyesore and throughout the whole thing, you didn’t have any spelling errors. So, congratulations!
Second paragraph ‘As usual, he would greet her in the kitchen, ‘hug’ her from behind and plant a kiss on the top of her head. ·
Tenses You keep mixing up your tenses. If you’re using past tense from the beginning then use it until the end. Change tenses only when necessary. ·
There are other grammar mistakes but it isn’t that much of an eyesore and throughout the whole thing, you didn’t have any spelling errors. So, congratulations!
characters: 4.5/5
To be honest, I’m not actually familiar with both Red Velvet & Winner but I like the way you described Irene’s worriedness and how she noticed her husband unusualness. There’s not much to say about Mino but Minguk’s innocence is cute.
overall enjoyment: 3.5/ 5
I actually liked it. However, I’ve read and seen these kind of plot too many times but it’s usually used in high school stories and tv shows. Despite that, the ending had me chuckled for quite a while.
total grade: 60 / 100
AUTHOR'S NOTE: This review was done by xXmysteriousXx who decided from time to time to lend a hand.
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