If You Cared

Killer
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Jong In entered the male bathroom and stood in front of the sink. He stared at himself through the mirror before his hand reached down into his pocket for something. He pulled out a small notepad and flipped through the pages.

He had written every clue that he and the group had found over the past few days, "An endless circle of death.. Those who try to overrule aren't exempt to the torture.. Eyes that can witness the invisible.." Jong In furrowed his brows, 'None of these help at all..' He thought. 

"You can't escape the speed.." He read aloud whilst thinking hard, "This was one of the earlier clues we got.. About the identity of the killer." He said to himself, "This relates to Na Young.." 

Suddenly he remembered something he had heard you say to Leo in the library, something that gave him chills down his spine, "It's an endless game.. Until no ones breathing." He gasped and his eyes widened, "It's Na Young."

'I've got to warn Leo! I need to get Leo!' He thought frantically. He heard a loud bang echo from outside and his body tensed in fear. He dropped his notepad and turned away from the mirror. A large crack appeared on the mirror as he, with his back turned, disappeared out into the corridor. 

He skidded to a stop when he saw you standing there, with a devilish smile on your face, "So.. I-It was y-you all along.." He stuttered nervously and stepped back, "How could you..?" He looked at you disappointedly.

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IvaLura
#1
Chapter 21: It's really cool story! The end is just perfect and unique! If it were not for a similar Japanese film, this story can be considered a finished script :)
Ichliebidich #2
Chapter 21: Wow!
AnieNana
#3
Chapter 21: This story reminds me of something from Japan I saw long time ago but I forgot if it's a movie or anime.... Anyway, it was really interesting and I had to read it in one go because couldn't stop reading
BaekHyun-Luver
#4
Chapter 21: Omg! I just read the whole story in one go! Wth.... ! This was awesome!! Wow! My heartbeat was racing like crazy! Now.. now.. I'm gonna take a deep breath whoooooo.
Thomas for writing such an awesome story!! Love it so much!<3
ladybugjaz
#5
Chapter 21: awesome story!
Hi_There_Peeps #6
Chapter 1: Wait your actually killing?
LeaderMaknae
#7
Chapter 21: I knew it i knew i knew .. it just didn't add up at all with the forgetting a death phrase and the kim ni na diary ong i knew i knew it .. i love this .. i love this !
galaxist00
#8
thanks for the very good story!
AemiJoemallow #9
Chapter 19: whaaaaaaaaat?! okay I honestly didn't expected that Na Young s the killler! I thought it will be Jong In never once it crossed my mind that it will be Na Young. Omaigad author-nim, you really knows how to deceive me XP
leolatte_111090
#10
Chapter 21: THIS IS MIND ING! UUGGGGHHHH AUTHOR-NIM DAEBAK!!

I'll be looking forward to your Leo fics in the future! XD