The Girl Who Had a Guest

Under the Tree
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Baekhyun walked Jihae back to her house that night without so much as a word or thought of complaint. In fact, he wouldn’t have had it any other way given the events if the day. Yes, this morning had been scary. And yes, he had wasted his entire Saturday sitting in a hospital waiting room twiddling his thumbs and talking to grannies about their haemorrhoids, but from when Jihae had woken up until now, he was glad that he was with her. In comparison to how she had been around him, now she was so different. She smiled, made attempts at teasing, and even laughed at some of his not-so-dumb jokes. And that made him feel special; it made him feel genuinely wanted. It was a nice feeling.

“Favourite colour?” he quizzed her as they dawdled along the road, neither one in much of a hurry.

“That depends which season it is.”

“Why does it depend what season it is?”

“Because different colours look better in different seasons.”

Baekhyun let out a light bark of laughter, tickled by the girl’s words. “So what’s your favourite in spring?”

Jihae paused, then smiled and looked at the trees as they walked past them. Even though it was dark, it was obvious what the girl was thinking of. “Green.”

Nodding, Baekhyun also looked to the trees.

“What’s your favourite?” she asked him back, feet scuffing lightly in her worn trainers.

“Green.”

Jihae immediately shot him a suspicious look, one that said she knew he was toying with her.

“What?” Baekhyun shrugged innocently. Green actually was his favourite, had been ever since the ripe age of ten.

Not saying anything but continuing to eye him suspiciously, Jihae hummed along disbelievingly.

“What?” Baekhyun repeated, this time sounding very defensive. “Green is my favourite colour – and not just in spring either. So, really, who’s the copycat around here?”

“Sehun does that to girls too,” Jihae replied coolly, not even missing a beat as she shrugged lightly as if all boys were as playboy-ish as Sehun. “He says pink’s his favourite more times than not.”

Baekhyun scoffed. “Well, of course he does. He’s like a walking chat-up line.”

Jihae let out a snort of amused laughter at that. “He’d be angry if he heard you saying that,” she mused, but nonetheless looked tickled by Baekhyun’s words.

Baekhyun knew the girl was right. And he really didn’t need to be in any less of the boy’s favour than he already was. “Don’t tell him I said that.”

Looking up to him with eyes that were halfway between playful and evil, Jihae purred impishly, “I bet he would just love to hear it.”

Face falling at the very real possibility that he could potentially be dealing with a very angry Sehun come Monday morning, Baekhyun swooped around in front of Jihae so that they were now both at a standstill. “Fine, let’s make a deal then,” he bartered seriously, sticking out his pinkie like it was a life or death matter. Jihae stared at it expectantly, no doubt guessing his next words. “Pinkie promise you won’t tell him I said that.”

Jihae hesitated before an almost triumphant smirk lifted her lips, then held out her pinkie but didn’t let Baekhyun take it just yet. “Ok. But only if you don’t tell him about me collapsing.”

Screwing up his face, Baekhyun drew his pinkie away a little as if he didn’t trust her. “That doesn’t seem like a very good deal. He should really know.”

Biting her lip, Jihae stretched her pinkie out towards Baekhyun a little, inching it closer and closer until they were almost touching. “I just don’t want you to be the one to tell him.”

That didn’t seem unreasonable to Baekhyun, but he still wanted a more solid answer. “So you’ll tell him? And your parents?”

Jihae sighed irritably, huffing a little. “I’ll get to it.”

Baekhyun smirked at the sight of her puffed out cheeks, then hooked his pinkie around hers gently and shook it. “I’m going to be checking that you do.”

 

Upon arrival at Jihae’s house, it became apparent that neither of her parents were home yet from the lack of lights on inside the house. But then again, the pair could probably have guessed that her parents weren’t home yet because of the lack of search party for Jihae during her unexpected absence.

“Thank you for everything today,” Jihae said, smiling up at Baekhyun happily.

Baekhyun still couldn’t quite get used to the change in Jihae since he first met her, but all he knew was that he wanted to see her smiling like that at him more often. She was really rather pretty when she did so.

“You don’t have to thank me,” Baekhyun replied, smiling down at the girl warmly. He hoped that she grasped just how sincerely he meant that, though somehow he didn’t think she would.

“I guess I’ll see you on Monday then,” Jihae said, turning to leave.

The moment she did however, the doctor’s words rang through Baekhyun’s head: she wasn’t supposed to be left alone.

“Wait, wait, wait,” he chattered, stepping around in front of her to block her path. “Call one of your friends over.”

“What?” she frowned a little.

“You’re not supposed to be left alone tonight – doctor’s orders.”

Jihae went to step around him, slightly raising an eyebrow.

“I’m serious, Jihae. Just call one of your friends, ok?”

Whirling back to face him, Jihae shot him a look that said you aren’t funny, then Baekhyun realised what he had just said to the girl with approximately two friends in the world, one of them being Baekhyun.

“Call Sehun,” Baekhyun insisted, trying to clear up his mistake.

“He’s busy.”

“What could he be doing that is so important that he can’t stay over at his best friend’s house for the night?”

“Meeting his girlfriend’s parents.”

“I’m sure if you called him he would come over.”

“I’m not going to do that.”

Baekhyun scoffed. “Why not?”

“Because Sehun is important to me, and this is important to him. So I’m not going to ruin it for him. I know I’m probably not the more tuned-in person on this planet but I know how bad it will look if I call him away from something like that.”

Ok, so maybe Baekhyun could see her point. That would look pretty darn bad for another girl to call him up whilst he was with his girlfriend. Baekhyun was pretty sure the word for that was ‘booty call’, though he didn’t class himself as an expert in any way.

“Well, what about that Lay guy?”

Jihae stared at Baekhyun for a moment, then her brow furrowed a little. “Who?”

“Lay. You know… about my height, dark hair, dimples… ”

Still, Jihae gave him a rather vacant look. “I don’t know anyone called Lay.”

“Of course you do. He was at the hospital visiting you earlier but you were still out of it.”

Jihae’s brown creased even more. “But I really don’t know anyone called Lay.”

“Anyway,” Baekhyun went on, shaking his head a little at her obliviousness. “The point is, you can’t stay on your own for the next few days.”

“I’ll be fine.”

“You won’t.”

“I will.”

“You won’t.”

Silence.

The pair stared at one another for a long moment, neither wanting to be the one to break the gaze by blinking first.

It was Baekhyun who lost with a defeated sigh. “What about Sehun’s parents? Couldn’t you stay at theirs tonight?”

Jihae went silent then, thinking about it. “But how could I explain it to them?”

To this Baekhyun didn’t really have an idea since the whole idea was to keep an eye on her, and if they didn’t know about it then it was unlikely that they would be able to do that.

He took in a long and measured breath, unsure if

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warmpenguin
#1
Chapter 17: this is really a depressing thought, but if sehun treated her that way too, doesn't that mean she didn't have a constant supportive figure by her side beside her parents? you mentioned that there was a time when they fought or something, so that's why this thought popped up.

but anyways, wow. it's a good wow, i promise, more impressed than anything especially with the behavior of her peers and teachers. you tackle the issue of bullying directly, not bothering to sugar coat it. there are bystanders who do nothing, showing that they are just as bad as the bullies who take action. then with the teachers who are grateful for baekhyun for being kind to jihae, but they themselves don't try to reach out and talk to her. throughout this, i'm also grateful to baekhyun, becoming friends with jihae despite the fact that everyone avoids her, but i don't think he's at the stage yet to intervene without thinking of some bad things. yes, i would assume that he was totally surpassed about his reputation and is willing to help her, yet when sehun comes into the picture, he stops. when he witnessed jihae getting saved by sehun and she noticed that he was there, she could quickly assume that he was watching her as a bystander, someone who didn't try to help her.

the feelings are well written; i can feel what jihae and baekhyun are going through. when they're happy, i'm happy. when they're sad, i'm sad. i just want the two of them to have a happy ending because that's what they all truly deserve. and i just realized that they're a bit like foil characters, because they are opposites of each other in terms of personalities and their lives too. his parents fight a lot while her parents are happy with each other. he is outgoing and easy to talk to while she likes being by herself and takes a bit to open up.

i'm not going to lie when i say that i did lose interest in this for a couple of days (it was going a bit too slow for me), but then i picked it up again and things started getting more interesting. now, i do enjoy the pace that this is going and am extremely curious about what's to happen next. i really enjoy your writing style and everything about it so far! thank you for writing!!
LILYpayne121
#2
Chapter 4: this is just soooo intriguing...i like your writing style by the way...real nice..love the omniscient narrator....
SarangRae
#3
Chapter 1: What a morbid society these numbers have created... I can’t believe the first thing you say to a person you’ve just met is essentially “when are you going to die?” I’m shook wtf
pandacathy
#4
Chapter 17: It's almost 2 in the morning for me but that didn't stop me from reading this story. I don't read supernatural stories often but this caught my interest. Jihae is someone I think I can relate to on some level. Her love for pens and her reserved nature are what I relate best to. She is a lovely person and it's sad that a lot of people don't see that because of her abnormal number. At least she has people she can lean on. I love how protective Sehun is of her and I love the friendship she has with him. Sehun is like the brother she never had and I love how she can be herself around him.

Speaking of friendship, the one between Baekhyun and Jihae is something I find my heart swelling to. I guess the moments they shared really tug my heartstrings. I swear, every chapter doesn't fail in making me think fondly of their relationship. Baekhyun is a special person and I love how you're characterizing him. He has a defense mechanism--as does Jihae--around his parents and it's something I understand. So far, he seems too good to be true and I'm hoping that he does not do a one-eighty in the future. He seems like a perfect person but it's obvious that he has flaws. Because of that, I find myself liking him more after each chapter :)

I'm enjoying this story so far! It's beautiful written and I'm looking forward to your next update :)

P.S. Happy holidays!
miildBreeze_
#5
Chapter 17: this is a great story, great character, great great. it's been a while i didn't read this kind of story. waiting for the next update author-nim, fighting!!!
Sey-ra
#6
Chapter 17: Waoh this story is so good.please update soon authornim.
huz-ya
#7
Chapter 17: its been awhile since i came back at aff and most of the time i would skip most updates but not this. i like this ff bcs both main characters seems so pure and real nothing are forced in their relationship
SakunoEchizen
#8
Chapter 17: UGH. I JUST HATE BULLIES >_<
I even hate those who just watched the three boys bullying her! :/

I guess they'll be in a relationship rumor :(

Welcome back!
swiily4ver
#9
Chapter 17: That last sentence-- I'm guessing there will be rumours of a relationship between them?
If I'm guessing correctly then well, . Not again. I finally watched the gawd awful 13RW and that show was all about that stuff.

Anyway we missed you<3 you might just be in time for Exo's comeback...in case you're still an EXO-L lol
L-lover234 #10
Chapter 17: Aww! I'm so glad that you're back! I missed this story so much, hope you can update it again soon! :D