Hi, i am Mr_CouchPotato. I am KpopHeaven's brother and i start write this story too. My sister write story tomorrow, because she is very busy now. So, see ya!!!
The plot and concept is very interesting, but it was hard to follow due to the grammar. Maybe you can get a beta to help you. Hope I didn't offend you ^.^
Chapter 16: The plot is interesting and good, but I get a problem to understand some parts because of the grammartical mistake here and there...so it'll be easier to read and understand the story some more if you get someone to help you beta-check the grammartical mistake. It also help you to improve it. Fast update maybe make us glad but completely understanding the story you put your heart to tell is important. :)
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