Fall From My Life (like sand through my fingertips)

Description

Taehyung awakes to the feeling of an empty bed and an even emptier heart.

Warm breath ghosts over his ear as Jeongguk’s murmurs resonate in his hearing, and Taehyung can feel the tickle of his boyfriend’s hair against his face.

Jeongguk’s voice is hauntingly beautiful.
…
“Taehyung. You’re dreaming.”

 

Foreword

Okay, so this is just a little drabble that I’ve written for an English assignment. It’s for the most part still unedited and I don't think it's particularly good or well written. Any feedback would be soooo appreciated!

Thanks lovelies.

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Leah_Rose #1
Chapter 1: AHHH AUTHOR, WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME???*cries for months* This was so sad and heartbreaking but I loved every second of it, thank you.
goldxntrbl #2
Chapter 1: *wipes cheeks* TEARS?!!!

This was really well done and my heart aches for Taehyung so much. Beautiful story, fantastic writing as well. All in all, you did a perfect job of writing this story (and making my heart smash into pieces)
QueenM #3
Chapter 1: I swear I felt my heart break into pieces, again.
QueenM #4
Chapter 1: This angst story matches my mood now.. Tears fell from my eyes when I read this. This is amazing, author-nim. Keep up the good work <3
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