HI every1 Am new to writting stories on Asian fanfic so please comment on my story and give me your ideas Thank you ;-)

am looking for korean(hangul ) friends and of course friends from all around korea hwaiting :D

Annyonghaseyo, my name's Veveanna, Am 16 years old this September,  i was born in Jordan, i went to England for 5 years, then came back, and found Korea world, accidently by flipping the channels and I've been obsessed with the Korean culture for more than 4 years,  i love super junior, Mblaq,2NE1, SNDS, Brown eyed girls big bang, teen top, 2am, 2pm,Davichi, kara and it doesn't stop here there's more but i will end up naming   all k-pop singers.