Chapter 17: the scary general bae turns into bae irene in just mere seconds, especially when she’s with seulgi THIS RELATIONSHIP I CAN’T- you’re the best, author-nim <3
Chapter 17: Me reading the part where Seulgi and Irene jumped off the ship: Why do I hear Irene's voice yelling "agdgdhhsjbsj" just like the one in Level Up during the zip line scene when Seulgi told her to say "Seulgi, I love you"? I can also hear her pleading "Baram-ah.... Ahjussi..." just like when she tried parasailing? What is going on in my head?! Hahaha!
Chapter 17: one. i'm really happy with the development of bokorene's relationship in this chapter. we didn't get a lot in the previous ones, but i feel like they got closer. like boko teasing her and then doing whatever she says, dear gosh, just get together already, amirite?
two. i guess..... seulrene......... i mean...,,,,,, what can i say? falling? for sure.
three. general bae is scary. i was willing to scream out the number of airships. on the other hand, traitor bae is endearing. would probably hurt seulgi's pretty face if she told me too.
(side note: boko isn't with the returners. much sad. very cry.)
Chapter 17: i am all for this Irene walking around wearing an oversized coat! bet she looked super adorbs while trying to convince everybody that she is the night lmao
totally read Yerm's screech at the end like the YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAA AHHAHAHAHA at the beginning of Larger Than Life's music video (na mean? XD)
question: how is seulgi gonna deploy the parachute if she's holding onto irene?
Chapter 16: That whole cheating scene and the dialogue and reactions that go along with it is so witty it made me chuckle!
I feel so bad for Wendy and Eunji :/
Great chapter!
Chapter 16: I've been a silent reader up til now because I didn't have enough confidence in my English to drop by and say something (I still don't) but I loved this chapter so much I had to say something
...there are so many things I want to say where to start
I love the way seulgi is portrayed here, so naive and ingenious yet so charming, irene was doomed from the start.
I love how you always expand the world, always fit in others characters, it's like another universe really. a real red velvet final fantasy au (I don't even know why I'm praising you for that it was literally written in the description lol but still, I'm amazed)
And omg I can't believe this fic was one of the reasons I started shipping wenji, THEY'RE SO CUTE WTF
Also I'm living for queen joy she really is a queen
I secretly don't want wenrene angst, I'm a strict seulrene/wenji shipper I don't want any of them to get hurt so please nooo I'll cry
I'll end it here, it's too long lmao
Even if my English is not perfect, I'll try to comment more from now on.
Chapter 16: Finally had enough time to catch up lol I've been trying to finish the game for the past few days but at the same time I don't want to sdlskd
Anyway, there's so many things happening in this chapter I love it!! It's kind of weird and amazing how you can make every single character shine in their own way hmm idk how to explain it. I can see where you're taking the story and so far, I've enjoyed it a lot! It's overwhelming how there's still so much to go through, but I think you're doing an excellent work!
Chapter 16: you used exo members sdlkfjasdjgv i thought u didn't know any boy groups askdjfhklsdjfhl
i really think the writing reflects the author after reading this, like, what?
yes, half of this chapter is depressing but i'm going to just /quietly/ ignore it. angst? i don't know her
how did yeri guess so accurately tho? did moonbyul not get the same treatment as joy?
and what is seulgi saying about no one cheating? aren't boko and irene cheating on her?
if i could reach the minimum points to upvote author, i would DEFINITELY DO IT!!! thks for the recent update showing us the interesting developments in the stories:)))
Chapter 16: Lolol i almost choked on dinner reading about Byul and Irene playing cards XDDD Byul sounded like a kid whining because she's on a losing streak lmao
And honestly..eunji should just break the fcking crown and toss bits of it to Leeteuk..Mean Girls style. A bit for you and a bit for you over there
Chapter 16: You know how in some movies they'll have a person turn into an animal, and all of a sudden there'll be a heap of clothes on the floor covering the animal because they're way too small for the clothes now?
That's how I'm imagining Irene in Moonbyul's coat and it's ing hilarious
(also of course Irene keeps winning you she literally wins everything are you kidding me)
Okay, but like YES, an UPDATE. My soul has been put at rest, I can sleep soundly now~ No idea if I'm the only one but whenever I read Leeteuk's creepy laugh, I also say it out loud and it sounds so weird that I have to pause for thirty seconds to contemplate what the hell I'm doing before I continue reading
On the other hand, Leeteuk is also a little and I'm ready to fight - but seriously, this guy. What can I say? poor Wenji getting played
Chapter 15: What a fun and funny chapter to read! I laughed at the conversation Byul and Sooyoung had while running. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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