I Need Help...?

Hiya guys~

Does anyone have any advice they can offer about writing? I'm writing a story and I want to make it good but I don't really know if I'm heading in the right direction. Anything you can offer is accepted lol. Also if you wanna try reading it I would not object ;)

I hope this link works. If not it's called Can't Forget You. It's Leobin, not my normal ship but I kinda just felt the need to write this...

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/900096/

But, really, any advice or things you have experienced is totally wonderful. Because I wnat help but I would also like to get to know my friends on here better^^

Thank you guys!!!!

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RougeTheHumanPlusle #1 Feb 8, 2015 23:45:58

I'd suggest having 1 or 2 people read it over to check for any misspellings before posting the chapter, or even for if you're not sure about something. Just some people who you trust to send them the first cut whether its to look over the storyline or to look for misspellings, just my advice

Luna92 #2 Feb 7, 2015 09:58:08

Hi, so I just read your story.. I hope you don't mind :3
Anyway, I really enjoyed what you've written so far, your writing style is so detailed and easy to read,
I don't normally read boyxboy fics since I've never really been able to get into them, but yours for some reason I had no difficulty in enjoying.

I think a plot twist would be interesting to read, but nothing too changing. I also get the feeling that Hyuk may be a little jealous? I'm looking forward to finding out whether it's towards Leo or the relationship in general.. Maybe he's lonely?

I'm not great when it comes to imagination, so I know how hard blocks can be :/ (Probably why half of mine are unfinished)
I hope you find something to spark your imagination soon..

I also realised we share the same birthday :D xx