Frustrations

OK I really just need to get this off my chest. I hate those stories that have like no background to them and just launch into a dialog with no rhyme or reason. Like seriously? Add some feelings into it. I just read a fanfic with Kai and a girl who were in an arranged marriage (can it get anymore cliche) and they hate each other and she had a past with a guy who her and left her pregnant and then her daughter died like 2 years later and then she gets in the arranged marriage and Kai is an and treats her rediculously coldly and then her also and she doesn't even do anything!!!! Like what the hell? Defend yourself woman you aint some ragdoll jesus... and then Kai, being the he is does it again and she still treats him nicely and he teases the hell out of her and has like the worst moodswings from no ing reason and is cold one second then all lovey dovey the next and it pisses me off because it makes no sense and then Kai's old love comes into the picture and he still has feelings for her and he has the nerve to tell his wife that he was lucky to have a strong wife like her? Whoever authored this story needs to delete it and take a creative writing class because im ready to kill myself over this frustration like seriously they obviously don't know how to create a good plot with feelings. If a girl is by a guy when she has a past with that she should hate him and not want to be around him not be shy and make him breakfast -.-*** and if the guy has the nerve to his wife TWICE then act like an "actual husband" when he has feelings for another girl he needs to go kill himself or get admitted into the hospital because he has serious issues does anyone else relate to this? These kinds of stories piss me off so much but i can never stop reading in hopes that the author will gain some sense....

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aihara_namika #1 Jan 15, 2015 03:34:54

why.. is .. there.. is .. so .. many , abuse and blablabla to women?
the author should plot her story back. did you report or something?
poor Kai. somehow people always see him as a y (maybe ert) person. he just a handsome guy
with kind heart. not a person who...(i don't want to say about this no more)

TypicalAuthornim #2 Jan 12, 2015 11:35:12

I really don't like people who write this ..... all they think of is and abuse?!

nerdychanyeolism #3 Jan 12, 2015 04:37:54

Wow... Its this kind of story plot that I hate the most... ... N then fall in love with ....

/because aff is a ing children site that is a child play/ /not/

velvetmajesty #4 Jan 11, 2015 21:57:21

please tell your opinion to the authors themselves. tell that their characterization is really done wrong. that way, you can help them improve as story writers, you can help them to prevent writing flawed stories in the future. maybe you can pm them, because some don't want negative comments on their fic. actually, i do that whenever i read not-so-good fics. there is one time that i've commented something on a fic, and you know what, the author deleted my comments and blocked me on aff. but still, i think i should tell what i think to her. still, i think i did the right thing, because her fic is really not good. now, i've also been frank to other authors, and guess what, they appreciate it and even thanked me because i told my honest opinions. they're glad that i've helped them to improve. there are more authors who are open and appreciative than authors like the one who blocked me. honestly, if that author who blocked me still has that attitude, she will never be a successful writer. even in her other endeavors, if she's not open to constructive criticisms, she will never be successful.

lol. i wrote a novel. anyway, that's what i really suggest. be frank, but be tactful. just imagine someone backstabbing your own stories. even if a person didn't name your story, you know that it's yours. just imagine. you'd be so hurt, right? it's better if they told you directly than backstab you.

Taoris95 #5 Jan 11, 2015 16:51:31

This post is really disrespectful towards the author of this story. They worked at their story, and you shouldn't make an entire blog post just to bash the story. Take your opinion, and go somewhere else.

mischievous_akmood #6 Jan 11, 2015 16:25:18

I just hate fics in general because pisses me off... and I usually dislike fics that are really cliché unless the author somehow manages to turn the cliché plot into an un-cliché story...
there's fics out there that have the potential to be amazing fics but sometimes it's the author that screws them up... sometimes there's fics with good plots but the author's first language isn't English and I know it isn't there fault but stories with bad grammar piss me off because I'm a grammar stickler...

justrelax_23 #7 Jan 11, 2015 13:43:09

I don't find any of that stuff entertaining, and I think I know which one you're talking about. It reminds me of that stupid Harry Styles story on Wattpad that everyone be tin their pants about. First off, the relationship was abusive and they fought like almost every single chapter and then have the next, its ing ridiculous. And I think some writers on here deserve WAY more credit for being original and coming up with their own creativity, instead of assuming people are attracted to plots like that. I feel you girl, I feel you.