Need opinion

To continue or not?

I started something...Of course Jongkey....annnd wanted to see if people will be interested in it...I might give any other idea up /aside from the started ones/ and write this if you like it.

Take a look:

“Abeoji…How could you do this?” A young woman ran to the bars of a cage, clinging onto them with both her hands, her knees gave up under her so she fell on them, small sobs escaping her lips.  “Why did you do this to him?” She asked but didn’t receive an answer. Only the small roar that came from the other side of the bars assured her that there was still someone with her.

The creature inside had lifted its eyes.  They seemed like they were full with hate and despise… if the creature could really think rational to feel that kind of emotions.

“Sojin, get away from it. They’re dangerous.” The man that was staying completely still behind her ordered firmly. “The chains could be ripped. We still don’t know his limits.” He looked down at her, only for a minute separating gazes with the creature inside the cage.

“They….When did he become one of them? How can you be so heartless…I thought you were my father….the one who’ll always respect my feelings…But what was he to you?” Sojin cried, eyes not leaving the inside of the cage.

“Material for my experiments.” The man replied not bothering to show even the slight bit of emotions. “Only some material I found out will be good to use.”

“Of course.” She sent him a glare and stood up, the creature inside of the cage started growling loudly, pulling at the chains that were holding its hands, the wrists already bruised from the pulling. It was heartbreaking for Sojin to look at that scene anymore so she looked away and after one more tear left her eyes, left the place she hated with all her heart and soul.

The man hit the bars with a metallic stick.

“Shut up!” He yelled, earning some more growling in his directions, the teeth of the creature shining dangerously at him, perfect fangs revealing under its upper lip. The eyes shown in the darkness that was surrounding it and the old man smirked….Exactly the result he was trying to reach.

Jong, you damn tease giving me ideas.... Tell me opinion...I badly need it!

 

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FreezingLove #1
Ohh,sounds interesting!!
jjongluvbummie
#2
sounds interesting.u should try.its good😊
aniangel07
#3
not sure. what is the girls role in this fic?
KasaiFates #4
IT SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL! CONTINUE THIS!
if someone says different they are wrong!
kpoplover4now
#5
Whoa....I just -- wow. Such an attention grabber! I would so love to read it!!
Elliey
#6
WOULD READ IT
PERFECT
OMG YOUT BRAIN IS AMAZING
FIRST CHAP TMRW? GOTCHA
JK OMB BUT SOUNDS AWESOME
WOULD LOVE TO READ IT
PororoDuizhang
#7
This is good, really attention grabbing so far, makes me wanna read more to know what's going on.