New posters (I need some advice, kinda)

Hello :D SO this is just a short blog because I'm still in the midst of writing but I'm home again and obviously, my photoshop-fever broke out, once more. First of all, I have three posters I have done since last night:D here they are.

 

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(third one was for a tutoraial I made :D I'm kinda proud of it, looks so light xD)

And here is my big dilemma. 

 

 

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So I've been working on it since the morning and it looks done but somehow it's just... not perfect? I have the PSD saved still so if any of you hawk-eyed people can help me with figuring out what I did wrong (without bashing)I would chase you with my love till eternity xD (my blending is , I know xD)

So yeah, that's it for now.

*goes back to writing Insignificant*

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MisyaDW #1
Blending and cutting the images, in my opinion, you've mastered them well! ^^ good job.
But you have this one problem. You are still confused of using the most suitable typography. Placing the words. Typography plays very important roll in a poster. You mess with it, how great the blending is, it will still look like a big flaw.
Anyway, I think that's it! :D
You are already good. Try downloading some new fonts. Everything will be perfect.
MyDeerLikesBacon #2
I'm not really an expert but I thought that the stream of light on the left girl seems a little oddly-placed. But I like your Jungsis one
GoodGirl10 #3
The title you can't really see to be honest and in my personal opinion, the stream of light on the left is in a kind of strange spot. But that's just my opinion!! :)
Jenday #4
It's probably the title. Maybe you could fill the middle with another focus and put the title on the black blob (left side corner?)
TheUnderground #5
Wish I could help. The thing I noticed is the title kinda gets lost in the middle there.
PictureMeBroken #6
The title is a bit difficult to read in tge position it's in, honestly. If I were you, I'd make it a bit bigger and wave it out from that negative space at the bottom left.
Other than that I adore the colors you used for it.
Especially how it's mostly black and white with just the pop of gold
aniangel07 #7
the right side looks really good. I don`t like the left side though. the transition between both on the top is a bit too clear and there is this big black spot. maybe you should use the same flowers to fill it?
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