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Far away from you, I think that is liberty

Waste your money ,that is free

Its my fault , cause yesterday I could not see

Crying, whimpering, hoping you will come around me.

(I am so sorry mom)

For all the things you gave me , you made me happy

All this money can buy a happiness (no)(no)(no)

I’m really sorry if yesterday it seems like I don’t care

 (I am so sorry)

As I lay awake I see your face

Even when the world is on your shoulders

Your smile never fail to bloom

When I bound to second place

You show me that I’m still important as always

Your tired eyes carry all those heavy weight

But I see your love with my closed

I wasn’t there when you shed your tears

I’m so sorry mom,i’m on my way

Mom here as your daughter, I want to say I am so sorry mom

(I am so sorry)

There are times , when I feel tired of those meaningless speech (I am so sorry mom)

When I feel sick of all those unreasonable rules
( I am so sorry mom )

When I feel really want to run away from you

I wonder if you had those times too

But as i feel the sky is crumbling down

When those people push me away

That small golden light guides me home

My heart wants to come home

To a place that I can always come back to(mom)

To a pair of fragile hands that can always bring me warmth

To you. . .(mom)

To someone that will always be there

To you. . . 

(mom)