OMG HELP ME!!

So yea...below is just an exerpt of something I wrote earlier today...and I also wrote a new Leobin Verse...but I'm thinking I could right a good amount for this...however I'm not sure I want to keep it VIXX...yes they are bad and all...but I think I would rather have B.A.P as the main for this.  Maybe I'll just cross it...pull names out of a hat for pairings...don't know yet...but because I was writting a Leobin verse I just ended up using their names....but hey it worked out a little....

 

JELLOCHAAAAANNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!  I NEED YOUR BLEEPING OPINION!!  @.@  and anyone elses who happens to read this~

Taekwoon stretched, enjoying the way each of his vertebrae popped with ease.  It had been a rough couple of months at the bureau; a serial killer obsessed with the little toes on ones feet.  Poor guy just couldn’t understand why when he cut them off his victim the toes lost their appeal.

                It was sad that they took so long to bring the guy in too.  He was sloppy, leaving trails of himself all over every crime scene.  But every time their team had thought they got close to him, the idiot managed to dance his way around them.

                A loud ring made its way through Taekwoon’s apartment, a quick assessment of his room showed that he had left a trail of clothes on his way in.  With every move of a man with a hangover, Taekwoon made his way out to his living room, kicking aside stray socks and shirts as he went.  He found his pants in a wrinkled heap on the floor, his pocket vibrating so violently that it seemed the tiny device would tear through.

                “Taekwoon?”  His nose scrunched in annoyance.  He had worked hard on this last case, countless overtime and man hours, he had been told to go home for a few days and rest.  Why wasn’t he allotted time away from his nosy team leader too?  “Taekwoon, if that’s you nod once!” 

                ‘Correction, Idiotic nosy team lead,’ Taekwoon could feel the collective sigh of the world.

                “Did you nod?  Taekwoon?  Hey!  Are you there?”

                “Are you insane?  Of course you won’t hear him nod!  Would you just video call him like I told you to now?”

                ‘Oh?  It’s nice to know that the idiot isn’t alone…shouldn’t leave him too long by himself…lots of sharp objects.’

                “Oh,” A pause, “You’re right Wonshik!  How silly of me!”  There was a beep of the call ending and Taekwoon smiled slightly to himself.  Leave it to Hakyeon to be an idiot when he’s not working.  Any other time the man was a genius.

                Thirty seconds went by and Taekwoon was contemplating getting dressed when his phone trilled for the video call.

                “Taekwoon!  There you are!”  Hakyeon was much too cheery for having been working for the last five days on little to no sleep. 

                Taekwoon glared at his phone screen, waiting for whatever reason the idiot called him for to happen.

                “Oh?  Are you Taekwoon?”  Hakyeon grinned into his camera like a fox.  “Did you find yourself a girl?”  A pale hand popped on screen to smack Hakyeon in the back of the head.

                “You’re a dunce, you know that?”  Came Wonshik’s muffled voice.

                “What the hell was that for?”  Hakyeon yelled at his partner.

                Taekwoon rolled his eyes as the two started to bicker….sometimes both popping in and out of the screen. 

                ‘Might as well get dressed.’  He thought to himself, shuffling back into his bed room and tossing his phone on the bed.  They would call for him when they remembered; after all, it was the bureaus phone, it wasn’t like he was paying for the bill.

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JelloChan
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O.M.BUDDAH FINISH THIS!!! NOW!!! I see this being more B.A.P tbh. But seriously I love this. your sentence about the little toes confused me though >.>;; OTL I think I got the general idea though :D