I. REALLY NEED HELP .

Ok , so I'm really sad and unsatisfied with my fics right now , I recently discovered new fics I like , it's been along time since I read new fics ,

I feel I'm lacking a lot and I don't know how to improve .

i at comedy huhu 

my fics seem centered about angst :( 

theres now equal amount of fluff, comedy in it .

also it's not that beautiful ?

you get me ?

like not the way of writing you'd say omg it's BEAUTIFUL!!!

WISE, DELIVERS A MESSAGE ?

 

sighs , I think I'm even lacking romance and friendship , sensory language is not helping either , I'm so down , zero creativity  T__T

Besides I can't help but misuse my characters , like some aren't even there and u have no idea how to engage them huhu .

I don't know, how authors pull off comedy , it's so hard!!!

i feel like srsly ,I wonder  if I was a reader ,what would keep me reading my stories ?

 

That I could answer ,if you are in the mood for an intensive angst dose , then yea go check my stories .!!

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LJoe4ever
#1
Waddup waddup. Not a really good writer myself but would say I'm average. It's just that I don't express my words because I'm too lazy to write them out. Anyway, let's take my story 'Maybe' for example. I started out writing just so awkwardly without knowing where my story was heading to. The time where I started the story, I was immature, impatient and just wanted subscribers and upvotes and comments like most people do.
But the truth is, it's not those three things that matters. It's about writing what you want and expressing yourself. Just because some random reader commented that she wanted this kind of ending, you'd have to changed the already planned one. It'd make the new ending unnatural and sound random. When writing stories, plan the whole thing before you start the story [ trust me, it'll make it easier to write ]. Don't plan the dialogues or anything, you just have to imagine what would happen in that scene, actions perform, convo exchange on what type of casual discussion and also the scenery. One thing I strongly suggest is to describe the places the go to in angst or romance stories - it gives the readers a place to start off their imagination and let it kick of. When describing things and people's features, use 3 adjectives at most.
As for comedy, imagine your characters are on crack. Yea.
Totomatoes #2
Aaaaw omo noona, I'm sorry!! But you should understand, your writing style develops as you write. I write sometimes, and they are mostly focused on angat, and that's not such a bad thing! You see, every writer has their own strong and weak points. Vultivating and further developing your strong points is the best way to be better, but once in a while, rxploring with new genres will help you as well!

Also, I already told you beforw about the pictures and gifs right? It's okay to use them, but I would suggest to not put them in the middle of the story, because it breaks the image readers have in their head (ahem, me ㅋㅋㅋ)

Don't be too upset noona, feeling like that is normal! Ah ah, I'm sorry as well, I didn't comment in your update OTL. Forgive meeee~~ ㅠㅠ
ChangJigays
#3
Some people are just not made for comedy? I like having a bit of everything in my storied. To be honest, I am not satisfied with what I write either, so I'm trying to write in different styles. You know, try to change from point of views and stuff, read poetry maybe, it's a thing I wanna try too.
QuickScope
#4
I see... Which stories are they? I wanna see :D