[R] His Other Half
Author: Exotic_Bana18
Story: His Other Half
Reviewed by: fangirl4ever
Title: [4.5/5]
Graphics: [5.5/5]
Foreword & Description: [9/10]
Plot: [17/20]
Characterization: [6/10]
Originality: [8/10]
Flow: [8/10]
Grammar & Spelling: [19/20]
Overall Enjoyment: [4.5/5]
Bonus points: [4/5]
Final Points : [85.5/100]
A/N: Just practice writing more, that will solve it
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