Author: Exotic_Bana18

Story: His Other Half

Reviewed by: fangirl4ever

Title: [4.5/5] 

Graphics: [5.5/5] 

Foreword & Description: [9/10] 

Plot: [17/20] 

Characterization: [6/10] 

Originality: [8/10] 

Flow: [8/10] 

Grammar & Spelling: [19/20] 

Overall Enjoyment: [4.5/5] 

Bonus points: [4/5]

Final Points : [85.5/100]

A/N: Just practice writing more, that will solve it