This is kinda challenging~

I'm looking and I mostly added on to Wasurenaide. I started writing it when I was about 14. My maturity and language changed as I got older and you can tell when I hit the maturity once they were grown. I always came back to it, year after year... older and older. But, I notice a few things. One, I jumped straight into dialogue. No back story. No introduction. Just... STRAIGHT INTO IT lol. Keep in mind, I was 14 lol. It stayed that way up until tonight when I was looking. I never paid attention to it. Then, some language is like... rude lol. Derogatory even. I have truly come a long way from my teenaged days cause reading it I was like I really talked like this back then and thought about things like this lol. Kinda cool that I kept it the same and you get to see how I progressed as the years went by. I kinda think that is special about it. And a part of me doesn't want to change that because it's been added to over the years and that connection could all be gone in a quick delete. lol. I'm not exactly sure what to do. Or how to do it lol. I want to bring Wasurenaide back but I don't want to bring it back just... like it is. I don't know, maybe I expect something new. lol. Have y'all noticed anything? What do you think? Should I change it or keep it? Did you mind the straight jump dialogue? Of course it gets deeper as the story goes on. I don't know haha. Please let me know! This is a favorite and one that I had the privilege to save before all the rest of my works (at 15-17) were deleted/lost. I saved this one luckily to my email before everything went bye bye lol. So, it is very special to me. :) I want to do it right~ <3

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Lotuspassion #1
You got a girl on edge wait for Wasurenaide
Lotuspassion #2
Do what you feel more comfortable with .

"If you want to change it do it"
If you want to leave it as it is then don't mess with it"
calikirb #3
If you really want to change it maybe you should copy it and just work on the copy so you could always go back and look at the original.