Why would you make an edit based off that 50 Shades drivel? There is too much wrong with that series already, you should use a different series instead. (I'm sorry, but there is just a lot of problematic crap in that book and I'm just surprised that people actually think it's and y when everything that's written in is not. Especially since the book is literally a rip off of another book (well, fanfic, since it started off as a fanfic that basically ripped it's entire idea from another fanfic, a fanfic that was actually written much better than that fanfic) and even the aspects are written terribly in it as well.)
Comments