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Title : Midnight Memories

Author : kimirri

Pairing : baekyeon

Genre : romance

Review : This story is very cute and heartwarming for a baekyeon fan (but I'm not, sorry) the plot is simple but its pretty well-written. Here is some things that catch my attention :

- you often use it's and its wrong. Just sometimes

-you must give more space or marking of the scene changing from the past to the present. Or when it changes to different time (but still in the past). Like when Baekhyun gives the jacket to Taeyeon calling him, it will be better if you just enter twice to give some white spaces. And when the text messages scene ends and you go back to the present, you didn't give any space and it kinda confusing, even if people understand that the scene has already changed

Good story, just maybe need more white space. You did well hehe.

Hope I helped a little.

xoxo