Which do you think would be good for my foreward?

This is for a horror story 

You will regret, you will regret it..

You will regret leaving me, remember this, remember me...

You will scream my name when I take your lovely life, I promise and when i promise i keep it, remember...

I will capture you the way you captured me, capture me...

Vs

Come here my precious, I don’t bite

I don’t bite but I might give you a fright.

Where shall I keep all this bloody hate?

When will it come the killing date?

Can’t you see?

Your just beckoning: capture me.

So please tell which one you think would be better