weird poem?

A weird poem that i wrote just now, lol XDXD

 

"dropped"

 

They say everything from up above should be welcomed,

catch it with open arms

But sometimes, not all from up above were gifts

Not a bad omen, nor a bad sign;

It’s just something out of the ordinary,

At a time you were relaxed

It just drops;

Giving you shivers and making you jump from your feet

killing it, with all your might

Instead of welcoming it;

Who would welcome

A spider that dropped from the ceiling

-UknowMi-

 

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yunhotic
#1
ohhhh..

"Giving you shivers and making you jump from your feet killing it, with all your might"

it sounds a lot like the "dance" min did when he was attacked by roachy~ lol!!!

should i share a poem i wrote for yunnie few years back? wat do u think?
amejunk
#2
I LOVE IT! I was expecting something so much more different but the little twist at the end is just so perfect!! <3 I LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEE IT~~ ;DDD

Thank you for sharing ~ <3
my_deardiary
#3
I love it esp the last two lines; Who would welcome, A spider that dropped from the ceiling.

Yup, no one would welcome the hardness in life.
simplest96
#4
whaaaat?? a spider? XDDD
how about a lizard?
bebebe #5
lol lol.. are you afraid of a spider ?? >.<
am3thyst
#6
i can't believe it! how can a voldemimi is scared of a spider?? XP
lovejunsu
#7
So true! You're a great poet!
LoveRain3Seconds
#8
OMG I LOVE YOU THAT POEM IS FUNNY AND LEGIT REALITY!!!!