TITLE (4/5)
The title fits the story, though the capitalization isn't 100% correct, as 'Of' shouldn't be capitalized in a title. It isn't a big error, as many don't notice, but I suggest changing it to add an appealing feel with good writing.
 
APPEARANCE (5/5)
I really like the appearance, as it's easy to read and shows details that the reader should know, such as why the characters are in a mental institution.
 
DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD (10/15)
The description isn't entirely describing the story as it should, as it only shows the characters, and not a brief overview on what the story generally focuses on.

PLOT/CHARACTERIZATION (30/30)

The plot is very well written, and the characters are created quite well, as they have their own personality and actions based on their disorders or tendencies. Very well done.

GRAMMAR/ SPELLING (20/30)

The grammar and spelling are done well, but there are occasionally missing commas within your writing, which ruin the flow of words to some extent. Some advice would to be double check your punctuation after you're finished your writing, adding commas in places such as "In his head," when at the beginning of a sentence/statement.

FLOW (9/10)

The flow of the story is great, aside from the errors in punctuation and ruined word-flow, and the plot progression isn't very sudden, which is good in writing. Don't try to rush things along, though - Causing too many sudden events within your writing could lead to a jumbled story, especially if chaptered.

OVERALL ENJOYMENT (5/5)

I definitely enjoyed it overall, and will continue reading further. Thumbs up! Try working on your errors, and in the future you may have an extraordinary review!

TOTAL (83/100)