What do you think?

Hey lovely people! 



I might be really blunt in asking this...
But I wonder if there's anything I can improve on in my writing?
Maybe something you wish I'd do more... Or less?

Someone recently told me that I should put more feelings into the story.
Like how the room smells or what the OC thinks is a special detail. 
I really love that kind of feedback!

So please if you have anything you want me to change about my writing, tell me!
Is there anything?
I'll love you even if you tell me there's something wrong.
Heck, I might even love you more ;)
Tell me anything and everything and help me improve!

I can't wait to hear what you think~

   
 

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7hannie #1
Same Sehun, same. Let me think about that...

Hmmm.... Those extra descriptions and such, it can indeed boost the feel of the story, but it can also be just a nuance for other people, that may or may not have a strong impact story-wise. Different authors have different styles. And I think you have this straight-to-the-point kind of writing. Especially with your one-shots. Though of course they were just short stories so they have to be on the point. But everyone who reads your story can see the improvement, most specially with the chaptered ones. You can try that suggestion you received, describing the story more. And if it flows freely in your head, then that's a good thing.

But basically, we love all of your works! <3
mmyyuseong #2
You're a great writer and an inspiration!!! I love how dedicated you are. Your fanfics are clearly wonderful <3 But I do agree with that person, however, only to an extent. Your stories have enough feels for me. I think what you need to add is more descriptions. This will help with character development and make a story flow better. But I'm sure you already know this ^^ HWAITING!!!
KpopAnimeGirl #3
For me , whenever I read . I think there are no mistakes (?) Maybe there are some but i did not notice ? Hehehehhehe . Anyway , your writing are always very good ! ♡♡♡
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