Of Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies Review #6

CRITIQUE:

by LoveInColors

Story Title: 5/5

There is no doubt that your title captures readers and fits to the story perfectly. Reading it gives me a feeling of calmness, peace and I suddenly feel the nature. I know, it may sounds weird, but that’s how strong it reaches to me.

Graphics: 10/10

Like your title, the poster it’s perfect. I have nothing to say on that.

Description and Foreword: 9/10

No problems with your description, its captivating, gives off an angst feeling, makes me curious. I can already guess that the end will be (not going to spoil anything for future readers from this shop) ******** but I still want to know.
About the Foreword, there’s nothing to say, you used it as an Author Note section.

Characterization: 8/10

You specified that’s it’s only a drabble and I should not focus too much on this section, but I will tell you anyway. I love your characters. You kept Amie mysterious and I suddenly craved to know more about her. For me, Amie was a optimistic love, who found happiness in the smallest things and didn’t hesitate to smile, despite her problem. Niel was portrayed as a caring and lovely man, and his love for Amie felt real.
What I like it’s that you didn’t add many characters and make the one-shot crowded, and only kept them. Thumbs up!

Plot: 39/40

The plot it’s not unique but then again, it’s just an one-shot and I can’t practically take out the whole plot, but I do get the essence and main idea. There’s not a lot to talk on this, but I have a weird feeling that something it’s missing ..

Consistency: 5/5

The flow was steady, clean, and understable, I didn’t get confused or lost. The whole drabble felt poetic, let’s say, like a melody. It touched me emotionally and, most importantly, it felt real.. In a weird and inexplicable way.

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Of Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies Review #6

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