An example Review I did for this story: Best Friends

Title: 2/5- The title is definitely relevant to the story. But, it's not original. 

Foreword: 9/10-The foreword is concise and the character infos are both neat and non-revealing. 

Plot: 10/20-The plot is definitely not original. Girl falls in love with her bestfriend, but doesn't get to be with him. It's a recycled plot and your story didn't stray much from the bunch. I did give points for kai being in a relationship with her cousin. That's a good start for stirring some family dynamics in, if they were close. But, seeing as they aren't close and Krystal is more like your common queenka 'b!tchy' type it was a little disappointing. On top of this, it was very predictable and left little room for surprise. 

Characters: 19/20- Despite the low scores above, I really love your characters. It's easy to extract their personalities. Ha young is very outspoken and independent. And she tends to hide her feelings for the sake of others. Kai is a soft, caring person. He's also weak minded. Which is how he's easily led by Krystal and does mostly what she says. You presented clear, strong characters. Good job. :)

Grammar and Spelling: 15/20-Your grammar was fine, punctuation was alright too. I have a pet peeve about 
something I like to call 'Slip Finger'. When someone puts way too many exclamation points or question marks and it seems like their fingers slipped on the button at the end of the sentence. I took away points because of this. 
Flow: 14/15-The flow was perfect in the technical sense. Events didn't come in randomly and everything connected back. 

Enjoyment: 2/5-It was enjoyable a little for those who ship Kaistal or KaixOC. But, I found difficulty reading it because Kai isn't my bias. I tried not to be bias towards the story due to that fact. But, the lack of twists really made the story dry.

Structure: 3/5 -You did something strange that could've worked out, but just didn't. The type itself was to the left. In a poetry style. This was a cool idea if you were presenting your story in a poetic manner that flowed from one sentence to the other. But, it did not at all. It made me read it a little weird. I kept trying to make it sound like a poem in my head. But, it kept being choppy. I could be just a unique human being and this is something that only happened to me. But, some others might have experienced something like this. The font was small also and the grey color was hard to see. It was burdensome to read for those with bad eyes.