Tittle: 3/5

The tittle's commonly used. If I were to search it up on Google or whatnot there would be endless amounts of the results, not only on aff but also on other sites. It is hard to find a tittle that's unique and suits your type of story genre, so I could understand. Although I would suggest a few tweaks, maybe suggest from your friends or family if you would like to. It does suit the story, of course. 

Appearance: 6.5/10

You don't have a background (( or my laptop just wont load it )) and your poster is really simple. It's simple, but I like it. It's not eyecatching and it's not too likeable. It can't really attract much attention either.

Description/Foreword: 8.5/10

It's really short and it doesn't really say much about the story. Not everyone would be interested in reading it but you could attract a number of readers because it has a slight hint of a mystery to it. It doesn't give away much about the story, so I actually do like it.

Plot: 23/25

The plot's cliche and is mostly seen around but you have a lot of twists, so it makes your story different from most simple and straightforward stories about arranged marriages.

Grammar: 17.5/20

You have a few mistakes (( forgotten 'a'/'an/etc, addings of 'ing' when not suitable etc etc )) and a few typos that I spotted along the way while I was reading. The typos were easy to decode but some might find them uncomfortable to be read. I would suggest to proof-read it whenever you have some extra time.

Flow: 3.5/5

It went on a bit too fast at first for my liking but it somewhat slowed down after the marriage. It's nice to be read to but it's not really a preferable type of flow.

Reader's comments: 5/5

lmf I guess you really gave them conflicting emotions.

Overall Enjoyment: 4.5/5

I love it nonetheless whatever I've said. It really gave me a series of screaming and all. It's really nice to read and it's one of those stories I'd go to whenever I want someone to be mad at lol.

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