Tittle: 5/5 The tittle seriously attracted me. I like how it sounds and I like how it has a meaning to it. It fits the story's genre and plot. It's perfect and no words can describe how much I love it. Appearance: 9/10 The poster is really beautiful. It's nice and I like it. The background fits it well, too. It just didn't capture my attention too much. The way you write is pretty different too. I like it. Description/Foreword: 8.5/10 It wasn't long and it didn't give much information about the story. It is intriguing and it can attract readers but some would rethink before actually reading the story. The foreword held a number of songs I personally like and I did listen to them while reading. It held meaning and it made the story a whole lot better than reading in silence. Plot: 24.5/25 You have an amazing and detailed plot. It's not something most people would think up off. It made your story stand out. I just couldn't understand a few minor parts here and there. Grammar: 19/20 You have really great grammar. There were a few letters missing at some parts that made the grammar decrease slightly. Other than that, there weren't any serious mistakes made. Characterization: 15/15 The way your characters play in the story seems very realistic. How the manager checks for Jongin, how the parents intentions seemed clear, how the maids played their small role perfectly, how the children were so sweet and they were childlike. I could go on and on about this. I personally love Kyungsoo and Jongin's separate parts too. Flow: 4.5/5 It wasn't too fast but it was sort of fast. I sort of lost track of the time in the story when I read it. The relationship progressed slowly yet the events were a lot. I didn't mind it,though. Reader's Comments: 5/5 I can sincerely say I understand your readers deeply. Overall Enjoyment: 4.5/5 I love it. Its beautiful, detailed and amazing. It reached my expectations for angst and the ending surprised me and touched me. Total: 94/100 // For: Infinitely Yours