[Drabble] Chinese drabble :)

Hey All! Just a drabble I wrote in Chinese (Chinese is my 2nd language and I desperately have to improve it, so well...)

《原来这是知足的感觉》

填满肚子的感觉真好，而心里感觉也真温暖，真舒服，真满意。
看着看着，突然连那炽热的太阳也没那么炎热了，四周也变得美妙了。
原来这是知足的感觉。

继续往前走着，望前看着，让自己陶醉在这朝气蓬勃的世界里------

等等。
我眼前的是什么？
肯定不是艳丽的花朵，也不是绿油油的草地。
是一台崭新的车。
是我的车。
我的宝贝车子。
而我的宝贝车子的玻璃镜子，被附近的高楼抛下来的收音机砸破了。。。
我的心，也就像玻璃上的裂痕一样，碎尽了。

就当我的泪水快要涌出眼眶湿时，一段路人的话传进耳朵里：“这么狠心肠的人啊！幸好没砸到我头上！”

我顿时愣住了。
但其实。。。也对。
幸好砸的是我的车，而不是我。今天算是我走运了吧。
这样想，泪水就突然干掉了，欣慰的心情也涌上心头。

原来这是知足的感觉。

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Would like to know your reactions to this! :) And if you want it in English feel free to ask, I can translate (Eng is my 1st language btw so don't worry too much)

Loads of <3 and have a great week ahead,

Natsuki

P.S. I just created a story a week ago, do check it out if you're free? Thanks!

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rainingcho #1
heh the drabble was awesome and it kind of portrayed a traditional chinese moral(?) idk how you call that. But writing is really 'foreign-styled', since I believe that you were thinking in english when writing this, eh? Most Chinese people don't write like that. And also, there are some vocabs in here that come out wierd, such as 寶貝車子 in Chinese we technically don't use the term '車子'. In here, if I were you, I would just simply say that 我的新車，我的寶貝。
feel free to tell me if you have any problems/ questions, I'm a native Chinese (;
rainingfears_ #2
It's nice! Very simple and yet it tells an important moral. I liked it ^^
iLuvYesung #3
wow, i like how you phrased some of your sentences. it's a nice drabble.^_^
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