Rain

Rain

 

Rain poured down ,

Streaming down .

Stained the wall .

 

Tears burst out ,

Rolling down your cheek .

Stained your face that is full of pain .

 

It rained nonstop for hours ,

Until one minute it stopped .

But it continued again after that . Endlessly .

 

I started crying endlessly ,

without any intention to stop .

I stopped crying ,

but cried once again as I remembered those memories that we creat together .

 

Rain started to pour again as the sky gets dark .

A liquid makes my vision blurry as I saw your face .

That radiant smile of yours , I just can’t get it out of my head .

Those laughter that we shared ,

Sad stories that we cried to ,

Kisses and hugs that you gave me .

It came back again as soon as I saw your face .

 

Whenever I cried it’s always raining , as if the sky feels my pain .

 When it has stop raining , a rainbow always appears .

Whenever I forget about you , a smile is always plastered  on my face .

 

I tried to run away , ignore and keep a distance from my fear ,

As if I’m a criminal  , afraid of getting caught .

I tried to act taugh , forget everything infront of you ,

Afraid that I’ll cry and it’ll rain again .

 

The me who never want to face the truth ,

The me who never admit the fact that I love you ,

The me that hides everything to myself .

 

The you who never understand ,

Who always get hurt because of me ,

The you that always to make me smile .

 

I’m the selfish person who never cared of you ,

The ignorant person who never understands ,

The coward who never has the guts to face you .

 

I was left alone once you left ,

The loneliness  always accompany me to bed ,

How I wish it would take  your place in my heart .

 

I hide and ran away from the reality ,

Afraid that I’ll cry ,

Afraid that it’ll rain again .

 

 

 

 

**Wrote a new song , since the last one wasn't so good , I decided to write a new one . inspired by the rain , since it's raining right now . It really inspred me . I hope you like it ! Please comment what do you think , and how to make it better .**

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XHeloPunkHerrt #1
Can I sing this song after making a melody? I really like it you know. :)
khairunnisaq
#2
i suggest part 4 and 5 become the chorus of the song. the song should be sang in pop ballad... hehehehe
exotremelyaddictive
#3
It's really good!! But I agree with sehunniekai, you should have a chorus and it'll be great! The lyrics are really nice :D
sehunniekai
#4
Hmmm it would be better if you have a chorus.
Rather than just writing it like this without chorus.
It wont really leave much impression.
Otherwise,i think it's good.
Wud be better if you can compose too.
I mean for the song,if not it's okay.
Just sayin
chexkana #5
I'm really curious as to what this sounds like...
Veektoreer
#6
WOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
UnBELIEVEable!
Dark50
#7
Did u take out lines from my fic?