There Was a Missing Girl in the Neighbourhood

 

There was a missing girl in the Neighbourhood

Your mama would say that she is no good

She was far too gone

Yet you are just so drawn

 

She was on her own way

It felt like she was grey

She couldn’t find the difference between black and white

And all that she know is that the air is tight

 

There was a missing girl in the Neighbourhood

It has been long since she lost her childhood

All she feels is cold

Yet all you see is gold

 

She was slowly losing hope

It felt like she was looking through a telescope

Everything seemed so far apart

It felt like she was staring at a piece of art

 

There was a missing girl in the Neighbourhood

And there she quietly stood

In the cold, dark night

Desperately looking for light

 

She was falling down

And there was no one around

She was so low that she couldn’t fall anymore

Before she leaves from the open door

 

 

 


So guys, I wrote a new poem~ I havent gotten the chance to update the story yet, but I'm almost done with it~

I hope you guys like the new poem, please comment what you think about it so that I can improve~

 

Please comment~ love you guys

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enterawsomename
#1
You're very talented, I dont think you need any improvements really :)
sleepingprince
#2
Nice poem :) so talented. It deep and I call feel the emotion ^_^