I handed in an essay last week. I've never felt like I handed in a pile of crap like that before. Here's my feedback:

"Title missing

Your language it excellent: clear, well-formulated, and fluent.

For the formatting of your bibliography, please consult the style guide.

An exceedingly good use of secondary sources.

You do a good job in entertaining alternative perspectives, capturing the subtle nuances and complexity of the marriages presented in the novel, as well as Austen's/implied author's ambiguous view of these marriages (e.g. illustrated by the fact that Lydia and Mrs. Bennet are not really punished).

Like your last essay, this one is very good and was an absolute delight to read!"

I'm speechless.