Unspoken, Untouched.

Title:

The title is quite interesting but it doesn't have enough attraction to make readers click on the story.

Language/ Grammar:

It's really rare to find any mistakes in the stories. But I find these:

'Because saying nothing is everything Chanyeol could do.'

Could do for whom? I think it would be better if 'Because saying nothing is everything that Chanyeol could do for her.' or something like this. I got confused when I first read the description. My mind need to digest the words first.

Description & Foreword:

The description didn't really catch my attention at the first glance. Since it was the first story I choose, I need to read it.

Plot:

The story is really different from many cliche story. Maybe I have read story like these before but it's rare to see this kind of story. It gave me a different kind of feels. I have never read about a super-sarcastic wife with a jobless husband before. It's one of a kind.

Characterization:

The character probably have been describe quite well through the story. Even by the words they have said, readers could catch the hint about how the character is.

Flow:

It's too fast and short. Maybe by write it a little more with some flashback could make the character looks real and alive. I can't really catch the ending. It was a bit odd maybe. What happen to her? She ran away or she die? What is the relation with the cup left untouched?

Overall enjoyment:

The story is overall great and enjoyable but readers need to read it till the end to realize how great the story it but I hate the fact that it's a cliff hanger-type of story.