Today we had to edit each other's horror story and you have no idea how sad I feel ;.;

This guy in our group rated my horror story and he gave me a crappy review >< He's like "Make your story more horrific!" T-T

Which is ironic because the three girls in my group loved my story LOL ^ One of them even said they liked the Korean names I used HAHAHAHAA ;D

Youngjae and Minji are good names right? ^^ (Speaking of which, those are the characters I named for the story I'm posting ^^)

Also, I'm not too sure about this, but does it matter when you but 'the'? The sentence I wrote was "As the both of them walked..." Does it matter if there's a 'the' or not? When they edited my story, they crossed it out so it sounded like 'As both of them walked." It sounds fine both ways anyways lol

IDK anymore LOL