Annyeong! :)

 

So i have been thinking about writing this NAP story. 

I don't know if i will finish it but it's called

'Paid To Hurt You'

It's about Niel who is a masochist who pays CAP to hurt him when he needs it. He is a perfectionist and is very strict with himself and asks CAP to punish him, as well as the fact that he just likes pain. Usually by a slap to the face or kick him around a little... you get the idea.

I decided to write it after coming to terms with my own masochistic tendencies and watching all these funny moments of Niel and CAP beating each other up! ^_^ Also i think it's about time i widen my variety of writing styles. 

Anyway, later on in the story i want them to discover feelings for each other, mostly ual but there may be some romantic ones in there. I haven't decided.

So they try out new things that are more sensual and one example is breath play. 

This is a little part that i wrote about what might happen (i don't know if i would use this but it was fun to write)

And i'm wondering what you guys think about it?

 

Here it is:

 

CAP laid Niel down on the bed, amongst the tangled white bedsheets, his head propped up by one of the fluffy pillows. CAP then swung one leg over the smaller's frame, so he was kneeling above him, but not putting any of his weight onto the younger boy. Niel seemed to pout at this but it immediately disappeared as he felt the older's hands reach around his throat. Niel gasped in anticipation and his eyes widened happily. CAP slipped one of the hands away from the younger's throat.

“Give me your hands” he ordered. Niel all to readily placed his hands into the large outstretched one of his Hyung. CAP then placed both hands back onto Niel's throat. “Place our hands on top of mine” he said steadily. Niel obeyed. “I will do this for you, but if it gets too much you must let go of my hands, do you understand me?”

“I won't want you to stop” Niel replied breathily, already from what he knew was about to happen, but CAP wasn't going to accept that answer.

“Do you understand me, Niel?” He said, raising his voice.

“Yes, yes I understand Hyung. Just please...” he replied, his voice desperate and wanting. CAP sighed and nodded, telling the boy below him to relax.

 

Niel tried his best to relax his tense and anticipating body, his eyes still trained on CAP. CAP took a steeling breath to prepare himself and he leaned forwards. The moment he started to apply pressure onto the younger's throat, his eyes rolled backwards in his head, but it was in pleasure. His legs started to slowly twist underneath him as sweet moans left his slightly parted lips, his hands tightening on CAP's who started to put more and more weight into his hands, pressing down onto Niel's vulnerable throat. Niel soon started to rile underneath him, unable to keep still as the waves of both panic and pleasure rushed through him, his lack of oxygen being made up for by his excessive amount of adrenaline rushing through his veins. CAP could feel his pulse racing wildly under his soft skin. Niel's face started to go red, his mouth gaping open, gasping for breath; his chest pulling upwards in search of the air his whole body craved.

Still he did not let go of CAP's hands.

CAP started to curl his fingers into Niel's throat, adding to the pressure at his fingertips and choking him even more, sending more waves of pleasure and pain through the younger boy. He started to cough and twist his head from side to side, his jerking body slowing its movements, but the look of utter pleasure was still clearly painted on his face. It was only when CAP saw his body slowly going limp underneath him, that he released his death grasp on the younger. He gasped loudly, finally filling his lungs with air, calming the burning fire inside them. As soon as he felt the pressure leave his slender neck, Niel's eyes reopened heavily and looked at CAP with a combination of lust, excitement, gratitude and satisfaction. He smiled tiredly at him, his eyes closing again slowly. His body losing it's energy, he turned his head to the side and sighed contently. For a moment he just lay their revelling in the pleasure of the new activity. After a minute or two had past, he reopened his eyes, blinking a few times before looking back into CAP's eyes.

“Thank you” he said, the smile back on his face. CAP nodded to him, happy to have served him, but unhappy that it had to be in such a way as this. He slung his leg back off Niel and stood up, offering a hand to Niel who took it gratefully.

 

Once they were both standing, they repositioned their clothes which had become a little rustled while they were 'experimenting'. Once their clothes were decent once again, and their hair in a somewhat ordered way, Niel started to walk to the door to leave. Just as he was about to reach for the door handle, CAP called after him.

“Niel, wait.” Niel stopped and looked back around to his Hyung who had crossed the room and was now inches away from him. He smirked at the younger boy and using his left hand, he grasped his right shoulder firmly, holding him in place and using his right hand, he slowly pulled the collar of his smart white shirt down so the side of his throat was yet again revealed and exposed. He then used his thumb to forcefully push his head to his right, slowly and sensually, before running his fingers back over the younger's throat and shoulder. Niel was already breathing heavily underneath him, wondering what on earth his Hyung was about to do to him now, but knowing he was going to love it, no matter what it was. Then suddenly, CAP seemingly attacked the younger's throat. His lips attaching themselves to his slim neck, along the shoulder line at the base of his throat. He first started by hard, drawing a sensual moan from the boy, CAP could hardly withhold replying it with his own at the sound of it but he kept it in. Then he opening his mouth a little and he used his teeth, nibbling hard on small areas of his flesh and taking shallower bites of larger areas. The whole time, Niel's eyes were closed, his head stretching to the right to offer more of himself to his Hyung's mouth.

 

When CAP finally withdrew his lips from Niel's skin, it was a dark pink, with small amounts of bruising forming and there were small red spots covering his flesh, showing he was going to get a hard and rather long-lasting love bite. CAP finished off by in one long sweep of his tongue from his shoulder blade, across his abused skin, up until just beneath Niel's ear, earning a pleasurable shiver from him. CAP smirked again at the reaction and put Niel's collar back into place for him, having deliberately aimed where it could be hidden by his shirt. Sending him one last look, he marched out of the room, waiting outside, to give Niel a little time to recover.

CAP had to admit, even though he would have preferred to have been able to smother the smaller boy in love and affection, that had been pretty hot. Maybe he could get used to hurting him, if he got to kiss him like that...

 

 

 

So what do you think?

Do you think it is worth continuing or is it just too weird/weak?

 

Kamsahamnida! ^_^

 

Ppyong,

BabyLocket Xx